At the Doctor's Office - Five Seven Five - Tanka
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~At The Doctor's Office~
(5-7-5- /- Tanka)
An elderly man
goes into doctor's office
for his physical
after a while the
doctor comes out, then says
sorry Bill, but we
discovered you have
a condition which only
allows you to live
another six weeks
"but doctor" Bill replied," I
really feel great
haven't felt better
in years,this just can't be true,
an'thing I can do?
Doctor, just thought for
a moment and said to Bill
well, you might start by
going down the street
to that new "Health Spa" and take
a mud bath each day
Excitedly Bill
Asked," And will that cure me Doc?
"No" Replied the doc,
after a little while, but,
will get you used to the dirt.
:)))
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2011
October.24.2015
Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter | Year Posted 2015
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