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~At The Doctor's Office~ (5-7-5- /- Tanka) An elderly man goes into doctor's office for his physical after a while the doctor comes out, then says sorry Bill, but we discovered you have a condition which only allows you to live another six weeks "but doctor" Bill replied," I really feel great haven't felt better in years,this just can't be true, an'thing I can do? Doctor, just thought for a moment and said to Bill well, you might start by going down the street to that new "Health Spa" and take a mud bath each day Excitedly Bill Asked," And will that cure me Doc? "No" Replied the doc, after a little while, but, will get you used to the dirt. :))) Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 October.24.2015

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Date: 10/24/2015 8:27:00 AM
lol! OMG I love it! I love twists at the end like this! It's so funny
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/26/2015 12:58:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly,Elis Artis, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate your very kind visit, comments and all:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

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