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At That Point

Looking for something, you could always come here and stand on the edge. You would be close enough then to cast a thought or two into that swirling mass of movement which seems to boil just below your feet. Time will seem to be balanced on some exquisite point, heightened to where the slightest movement will cause all to spill, to face the thought of either holding still until everything subsides and you withdraw back into yourself, or move and let love take you to wherever it wants you to go.

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Date: 9/28/2022 2:45:00 PM
Beautiful juxtaposition between chaotic thought swirl and the peace of stillness. Love it!
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/28/2022 6:57:00 PM
Thanks Becky for your thoughtful comments....much appreciated. Nice to know that ones words settle somewhere. Regards, Paul

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