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At Sea

At Sea Hello my love,I'm out to sea,We're almost as far out as we can be! I'm writing this poem,as I'm very board, I just said my prayers, My prayers to the lord. My mind is just woundering, when I'll be back, as I lay here this night alone in my rack.I know I'll be home soon,I feel it inside.My heart, it is speaking, my feelings won't hide.We'll be close together,again you will see, as close as a husband and wife can be. I love you dear wife, more then you would ever know.Thats why in the Navy, away I do go. Goodnight to you love, I will say goodbye,I'll see you real soon,I hope ,I won't cry. Elizabeth L. Daniels

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/7/2016 2:47:00 AM
elizabeth daniels, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:57:00 PM
elizabeth daniels, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-
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Date: 4/15/2011 9:03:00 AM
Nice narrative poem with passionate thoughts, elizabeth
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