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She told someone that my verse was lacking It failed to stir her idea of inspiration and feeling Kept her waiting for the spontaneous ending Left her with nothing more than discontentment She wasn’t very private with her thoughts of me My muse, she said, was nothing but an invention Of curiosities, leaving her with ample room to gossip About me, with several words that deserve omission She left me feeling so ashamed that I even posted A poem so unenlightened and benighted that I hoped I could simply delete the words before anyone else Happened across my verse with sure words of warning Finally, after much worry and wishing, I changed the title To “a failed poem” and left it with words of choice forgiveness For her, who had given me so much to feel discouraged for… I simply told her, “I love you. God loves you and I forgive you” After all was said and done, I turned the other cheek to her Allowing her the opportunity to strike me with more words Of dissuasion and caution, allowing me the opportunity to Bless her in spite of my desire to feel better.. yet, I feel my best! Matthew 5:39 - But I say unto you, That ye resist not evil: but whosoever shall smite thee on thy right cheek, turn to him the other also. Judged By A Jury Of Your Peers Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Koplin October 29, 2020 NOTE from Author: This is a totally fictional poem for the contest theme only

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Date: 11/14/2020 4:35:00 PM
so glad its fiction for you Regina, sadly others on the site have been targeted and over the years I have had many friends leave:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2020 10:10:00 AM
Such a great poem! Thank you so much for entering my contest Regina! I appreciate your time!
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Date: 10/29/2020 5:28:00 PM
As the Prophets wrote, Those who can remain silent when insulted shine brighter than the midday sun. Good for you, Regina. :) Gershon
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Date: 10/29/2020 5:27:00 PM
wow, you really brought the topic alive. Did it really happen to you? Something similar happened to me several times and it really makes a person feel horrible.
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Date: 10/29/2020 12:39:00 PM
I hope this is fiction. Personally I would have ignored any comment meant to disparage mine. Still I would have complained to the administrators. There is no place for bullies like this. ~~
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Date: 10/29/2020 11:03:00 AM
The high road is, so often, filled with boulders and deep holes created by pain but, as you point out, it is always paved with forgiveness. I am so sorry you had to endure this pain but your response is a shining example of what can be gained through forgiveness and prayer dear friend. All the best for a win in the contest. Prayers and blessings to you!
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Date: 10/29/2020 7:02:00 AM
Hi Regina, What a good entry for the contest theme. Your heart and character shined bright in this piece. Although forgiveness is what Christ said one is supposed to do, it’s the hardest thing to do. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/29/2020 6:35:00 AM
Sounds like you have the patience of a Saint, that was me years ago, I'm not that good anymore. lol, I think we need to treasure our friends, and if they have nothing better to offer then criticism, then they are not worth the time of day. I pray for them, but I stay away. Thank you for sharing your quality poem, I always love stopping by, to dip into your beautiful precious heart, love and friendship, xo
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Date: 10/29/2020 4:53:00 AM
It is such a heartfelt missive, and truly an experience that most of us have been through in one way or another. It is difficult yet absolutely necessary to send love, prayers and forgiveness. It speaks volumes about your character.
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