Gershon Wolf Poet Limerick

At Least One Screw Loose

         George was a prankster, at least one screw loose
         Peed in a bottle, tagged it orange juice
             His mom drank it all down
             Then she started to frown
         Her face turned red, then white ~ then chartreuse

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Line Gauthier July 29, 2025 at 7:47 PM Thought of an alternative for your last line ~ Face turned a lovely shade of chartreuse Gershon Wolf July 29, 2025 at 8:04 PM Good suggestion, Line. Thanks. ~ gw

Rowena Velasco July 28, 2025 at 5:21 AM Haha, Gershon never holds back! That last line totally got me—chartreuse is the perfect twist. Poor mom, but also… George, really?!

Kim Rodrigues July 26, 2025 at 3:53 PM gr…ossss! LOL

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2025 at 11:20 AM Great limerick. You've got the beat of it too. Gershon Wolf July 29, 2025 at 8:06 PM Just like Michael Jackson... I can 'Beat it' too. lol.

Bill Baker July 25, 2025 at 6:07 PM Eeeewe, that was not nice, but a good Limerick. BB

sara Etgen-Baker July 25, 2025 at 4:50 PM EEEEW! clever, though.

Joyce Faure July 25, 2025 at 12:20 PM wow! Thanks for Sharing! Gershon Wolf July 29, 2025 at 8:05 PM Wowie-zowie, Brenda.