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At Least One Giant Ground Sloth Is Alive Again

I found it curled in the shadow of what used to be a hospital. A slow hunch of fur, the color of old bark—like the forest had tried to grow itself a question. It didn’t look surprised to see me. Just blinked, as if measuring whether I was worth the glance. I sat cross-legged beside it, tore foil from a protein bar— offered the whole thing, wrapper and all. It took the crinkle in two fingers, held it to the light. Didn’t eat it. Just listened to the sound plastic makes in a nuclear breeze. It exhaled desert globemallow. A whole Quaternary extinction in a single breath. I didn’t ask my question out loud, but I think it heard anyway. Do we stand a chance? The sloth leaned its weight across a rusted sign that once read urgent care. It didn’t speak, but something about the pinch of its thick, prehensile lip said it knew what we’d done— to the soil, to time, to ourselves. It forgave none of it. When it finally turned to leave, I followed. Not because I thought it could save me, but because it didn’t try to.

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Date: 5/21/2025 11:52:00 AM
This is a great piece of literature! Poetic but short story worthy... very well written and commanding attention! Congratulations! Xo
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Date: 5/18/2025 2:31:00 PM
Jaymee I can't imagine you getting an n/a in any contest as your poetry is always top notch. I agree with the Giant Sloth. We're probably not worth saving. Congrats on placement
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/18/2025 5:18:00 PM
Awww I'm glad. And I saved your soupmail. Might give it a try
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 5/18/2025 5:14:00 PM
Your comment actually touched me, Tom. Whether you intended its poignancy or not, I appreciate the sentiment. And I'm so happy to have placed in this contest. It triggered a series of pieces that I've gotten placed in some journals too!! I genuinely appreciate you. Have a wonderful evening :)
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 5/18/2025 5:12:00 PM
Haha! An n/a happens more often than you might think ¯\_(?)_/¯ I stopped attaching too much to the outcome because often the prompts are super interesting, and sometimes my stuff gets published with payment elsewhere, so it's hard to stay annoyed too long LOL

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