At First Embrace

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People, Man, Woman, Couple, Love

You reached for me pulled me to you at first embrace and I was home in port from every restless, needless journey. I wanted to exhale, completely and sudden sleep came over me your body, narcotic I could have stayed there forever but my impulse was to run away from home. 8/19/19

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/21/2019 8:37:00 AM

Janis....Wow! This would rate First Place with me. A Fave my friend! Congratulations on your win! xxoo

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/22/2019 8:01:00 AM

Thanks so much Connie for the Fave. You are truly a mood booster you have no idea what this has done for me today. Thanks and Blessings.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/20/2019 10:38:00 AM

narcotic body, so deep! great poem sweet Janis. Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement. I was honored to read your poem :)-luloo

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/21/2019 5:15:00 AM

Thanks for the placement in your contest, You are always inventing ways to delve into our true feelings with your challenges.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/19/2019 8:33:00 AM

You painted a story so apt with these words of yours...Good luck with the contest.

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/20/2019 7:02:00 AM

Thanks for the well wishes Jeanne. I appreciate it. Janis