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At Autumn's Farewell Ball

November weaves herself a gown that sparkles like snow falling down. At Autumn’s Farewell Ball she’ll meet the one who’ll sweep her off her feet as they go waltzing on leaves strewn on forest floor ‘neath silver moon. When all fall’s leaves have crumbled brown, November’s lover dons his crown, and his arrival shall be fleet. Once snowflakes fall - her king she'll greet. Yes, Winter is arriving soon. November in his arms shall swoon. November 7, 2020 for William Kekaula's Lay November Poetry Contest Syllables checked by HMS Rhymes by RhymeZone

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Date: 12/4/2020 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/3/2020 5:58:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 12/3/2020 5:11:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea, Congrats on a well deserved win..
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Date: 12/3/2020 12:09:00 AM
Cool Poem, Andrea! Very creative to think of fall and winter as lovers. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/2/2020 9:01:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Love
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Date: 12/2/2020 5:46:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Andrea, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 11/18/2020 12:44:00 PM
wow, this is really lovely
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Date: 11/17/2020 5:15:00 AM
Autumn as only you can write it, Andrea: Straight into my FAVS. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 11/9/2020 11:12:00 AM
A excellent write, Andrea!! A dramatic representation of November!!
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Date: 11/9/2020 8:40:00 AM
Wonderful poem Bravo Andrea - an absolutely breathtaking write, as I am sure William will think - I predict a 1st for this write. Don't think you need luck but best wishes for a win! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/8/2020 5:56:00 PM
So gorgeously penned Andrea. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 11/8/2020 4:05:00 AM
Enjoyed the personification work. We are in the middle of fall so winter will soon be on the scene. We have already had our first frost here but next week is supposed to be in the seventies all week but with rain. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Date: 11/7/2020 11:58:00 PM
A sweet personification of November at the Ball awaiting her Winter King. Love this, right up your alley. Looks like a winner to me ~ John
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Date: 11/7/2020 7:34:00 PM
So charming, I enjoyed it with a smile :)
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Date: 11/7/2020 6:05:00 PM
Not familiar with this form, Andrea. Your poem is lovely.
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Date: 11/7/2020 2:03:00 PM
Andrea, that is so good, an awesome creation, love it! Belle :-)
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Date: 11/7/2020 12:01:00 PM
Great imagery of November's charm, Andrea.
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Date: 11/7/2020 11:23:00 AM
Pretty!
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Date: 11/7/2020 10:24:00 AM
A charming and alluring poem about a love story in November. ~~
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