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At Autumn's End

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Summer-scented blueberry breezes announce Autumn as scarlet shades tint the trees. And loose leaves, like crinkled crimson, fall as songbirds sing a forlorn farewell. Daylight dims, darkness descends, and warm winds morph into fickle friends, scattering snowflakes at Autumn's end.

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Constance La France

Date: 11/30/2021 9:35:00 AM

Emile, truly a lovely poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest and I love the image too ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/30/2021 9:55:00 AM

Thanks, Constance, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/29/2021 5:04:00 PM

Wonderful writings, Emile. Congrats on your winning poem!

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/30/2021 6:45:00 AM

Thanks, Charles, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/29/2021 10:49:00 AM

Nicely written and rewarded. Congrats, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/29/2021 12:47:00 PM

Thanks, Jenna, I appreciate your comment my friend, Emile.

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2021 6:46:00 AM

Splendid write Emile, Congrats on your win

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/29/2021 7:28:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.

John Lawless

Date: 10/31/2021 6:43:00 PM

A simple seven line math problem involving many fingered calculations. Yours is a masterfully crafted farewell to Fall, beautifully done Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/1/2021 9:41:00 AM

Thanks so much, John, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/31/2021 12:18:00 PM

Emile, check your syllable count on line 2 on this fine write.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/1/2021 9:42:00 AM

Thanks, Jenna, I used the PoetrySoup syllable counter and it says it is 11 syllables, but I think you're right, so I changed it anyway my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/31/2021 11:50:00 AM

Emile, by far the best Alliterisen format I have read, and with the contest, I have read several. Yours is a masterful composition...but, of course, it isn't so unusual because you are a master craftsman with words. Many of my alliterations seem to come naturally, but I may give this form a try, but not for the contest. Beautiful!!!

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/1/2021 9:44:00 AM

Thanks, Milt, it is always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.