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At 9:17 Pm Precisely

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At nine-seventeen PM, precisely his watch stopped, broken by the impact not when he fell, but when he landed and lay there, crumpled on the rocks, dead. Seconds before he had been laughing fooling about, posing for a selfie on the cliff top using his own camera held at arm's-length in front of him. He swung around stepping carefully between the rocks, trying to get the mountain behind him in the shot. Just before nine-seventeen PM he tripped and fell backwards over the cliff to his death, a selfie.

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Date: 7/17/2018 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Creative and timely. Well told. :)
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Date: 7/15/2018 11:08:00 AM
...and it happens all the time, John, we have had a spate of cliff deaths here on the south coast. A fine write, congrats. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/14/2018 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2018 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations! Hopefully fiction but certainly puts emphasis on 9:17 pm.
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Date: 7/14/2018 7:59:00 AM
I hope its fiction John, but you make it real. I remember a similar event (not selfie related) happening on Grandfather Mountain in NC many years ago.
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Date: 7/14/2018 7:36:00 AM
an all too probable ending given today's obsession with self. Last line is a jolting awakening. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 6/22/2018 10:32:00 AM
Probably not fiction. xomo
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Date: 6/22/2018 8:09:00 AM
This would be an awesome ad for Mothers Against Selfies. Young people are so used to the UNDO button that they never bother to think about consequences. Well written poem, John.
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