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Astronomy of Love

The sun is over ninety million miles away While the moon shines nightly above But the stars reside in your gentle eyes Like tiny sparkling diamonds of love On a space ship we call “Enchantment” We set sail on a placid sea of bliss Wrapped in the arms of the goddess of love Enraptured by the warmth of her kiss Floating like a couple of heavenly bodies On a collision course of emotions Destined to be joined in celestial union Filled with real love and devotion There's no greater feeling than mutual love Poets strive to write about in rhyme The ultimate emotion known to man A feeling of pure joy so sublime The sun's over ninety million miles away While the moon shines nightly above But the stars reside in your gentle eyes My darling, my obsession, my love! © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 9/3/2014 12:10:00 PM
Bravo! No wonder why you're #31 in the Top 100 Popular poets, and 163 in the All Time Community Builders... and rising! Your smiles and poems are important to more people than you know! Dragon and I say... YOU GO JACK!We do't come here daily for nothing! A star is born... I bet you can even hear Dragon and me clapping all the way to Canada... Besides, you're such a romantic... I bet Cathie is swooning!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/3/2014 5:35:00 PM
WOW! You are one sweet friend my dear dear Carol! It was a lucky day when our paths crossed! Thank you as always my dear Carol! XOXOX
Date: 9/3/2014 8:45:00 AM
Oh that's an awesome reply - love to love! Really loved ur response o great poet !
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/3/2014 10:30:00 AM
That's what it's all about, isn't it!!! XOX
Date: 9/3/2014 7:41:00 AM
Romance with nature isn't it ??
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/3/2014 8:41:00 AM
I love to love! XOX
Date: 9/3/2014 7:20:00 AM
Wow the greatest ever romantic Jack ! Love the simile here,, starry eyed fortunate lady!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/3/2014 7:30:00 AM
WOW! Did I write that??? What an old romantic devil, eh!!! LOL XOXOX

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