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Gray is this damp November day If only in the bed could lay But duty calls then come enjoy Bees, butterflies have a convoy On zinnias, pineapple sage They dance, flutter as if on stage A few lavender blossoms sway 'Pon rosemary; breezes display November switches she's so coy Then struts as a season decoy November seems us to assuage From summer's heat, then it's upstage Sponsor: William Kekaula Contest: Lay November Checked rhyme with www.rhymezone.com Will check syllables with PS syllable counter; Checked with PS, Made corrections.

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Hilo Poet

Date: 12/2/2020 6:00:00 PM

Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Sara, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2020 5:55:00 AM

William, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate you letting me know that I placed. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/8/2020 11:26:00 PM

A November scenario to admire. ~~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2020 7:30:00 AM

Victor, Thanks the scene was in my backyard if only for a few minutes that I could be there and enjoy. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/8/2020 10:15:00 PM

Love your November, Sara, a poem that learns this reader far over the seas, a different aspect, and yours a beautiful one.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2020 3:50:00 AM

Harry, Thanks for visiting. I am glad that you learned a little about the south in America. Sometimes it is different. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2020 1:05:00 PM

a lovely lay for november. You are so lucky to be enjoying sunshine. We had our first snow and now I'd say winter is here!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2020 3:44:00 AM

Andrea, We had a heavy frost two mornings and there was some damage but I still have blooms in the garden. They are looking hurting from not enough moisture and some damage from the frost but the butterflies bees, and hummingbird moths are still drinking what nectar they can get. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2020 12:27:00 PM

- You describe November so beautifully ... best wishes in the contest, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2020 12:29:00 PM

SS, Thanks. Right this minute it is lovely but we never know when things will change. Sara

Silent One

Date: 11/8/2020 12:22:00 PM

Lovely imagery Sara... If only all days in November were like this... A tip, check syllables on www.howmanysyllables.com, that website is more reliable. Take care.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2020 12:28:00 PM

SO, I corrected it according to PS so they are correct but I disagree with a word or two but that is okay. It is according to how it is pronounced in your area. Thanks for dropping by. Sara