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Asleep-Awake

Asleep Exhausted, restless Dreaming, snorting, turning Sunlight, alarm, shower, coffee Stretching, yawning, changing Irritable, confused Awake

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2017 6:27:00 PM

this is a GREAT example of this little form you have done back here. I kept clicking and clicking and finally found a poem I had not seen back from 2014!!

John Michaels
Date: 6/6/2017 1:31:00 AM

Wow, I'm flattered that you've read all my stuff and impressed you remembered which ones you'd already seen! Thanks for the kind comments about one of my early pieces (not just published, but written in my early poet days). Kind regards, John.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/27/2017 4:28:00 AM

Hello John Good Morning. Wonderful contrast between the two. I chuckle and smile at the irritable and confused. Isn't that the truth (lol). Have a wonderful day. Well done

John Michaels
Date: 6/6/2017 1:31:00 AM

Thanks so much, Lisa. Always grateful for your comments. Regards, John.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/5/2014 11:20:00 AM

Describes the process of transitions so vividly in a few words. SuZ

John Michaels
Date: 6/9/2014 2:17:00 PM

Thanks for the kind comments and for stopping by. Glad you liked it...