Askuwheteau

Askuwheteau meaning he keeps watch was a French speaking Indian who came 
from the Algonquin tribe head aching from braids he lay down his long hair and sit 
propped against a tree not far from the wigwams he lived in there he played his 
flute to soothe his tired mind watching for any signs of harm to his people he had a 
knack for spotting out shadows of other beings well before the figure came into 
focus but this particular night was calm and peaceful knowing this he played with an 
echo enticing the spirits to come and dance for this was a rare occasion where there 
need be no worry of attackers to pleage them his people not far hearing the joyous 
celebration skipped across the woods to join him song turned to feast and feast 
turned to stories being told around a new built fire feeling eased and secure no 
need for shelter they soon fell into a heavenly slumber

Contest : Tell His Story
By: Virginia Frayer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 21, 2016 at 1:48 PM
great write, Virgina, the title caught my attention. SKAT
Mehta Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Constance, Virginia
Haick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Remarkable storytelling, Virginia! Congratulations on your deserving win in the Contest! Love, Annalise
Freeman Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Always a pleasure to see you in the top ten, Virginia. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored tenth place. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:25 AM
Congratulations on your super win Virginia in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
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March 22, 2011 at 9:22 AM
Such a great story, Virginia. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 9:14 AM
Many congrat's on your WIN, Virginia. Wonderful story. Lainie
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March 22, 2011 at 12:31 AM
Congrats on this winn virginia.
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:46 PM
my happy cheers to you for the special win, virginia :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Congrats Virginia on your wonderful win in Tell His Story contest with this stunning write luv.. enjoy your top ten success...
Oimbo Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 10:38 AM
OK must say this is a fine way of emancipating poetry from limited traditions
Devonshire Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Great work, Virginia. I like his French name -- I think there were other tribes that allied with the French as well. It is easy to imagine from the picture that he slipped off into the night to "soothe his tired mind" and find some peace. Also appreciated the uplifting ending. Wishing you success in Constance's contest! Thanks for your comments on The Most Vulnerable. There are already people calling on Congressman West to run for president. Love, Carolyn
A   Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 9:08 PM
NICE,, AND THANKS FOR SHARING,, I FOUND THE WORD VERY INTERESTING... GOOD LUCK AND TAKE CARE,..P.D.
Mehta Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 4:31 AM
Nice narrative on a French Indian, nice interpretation of the picture, Virginia
La France Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:29 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Virginia, a very good poem inspired by the image~~
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