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Ashes To Ashes Dust To Dust

Excerpt from the Book of Common Prayer, For the Burial of the Dead "Earth to Earth, ashes to ashes, dust to dust, insure and certain hope of the Resurrection unto eternal life, through our Lord Jesus Christ"... ~~~ Ashes to Ashes Dust to Dust Morning cast a dusty light in our room, Streams of dust, dancing and pirouetting, Brightening up the stark and dismal gloom; Drifting specks in the air, unrelenting, Shafts of whirling light, disorienting. Hear the strains of music that we adored; Shared memories that I seek and implore, With candle light dinners on land and sea, Savory delights with wine you would pour, We both knew, I loved you and you loved me. Date: Feb. 2, 2022 For: D Forms Dizain-Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Placed 2nd in contest

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Date: 2/15/2022 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Paulette. Outstsnading write. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 2/18/2022 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Debra. :)Paulette
Date: 2/15/2022 10:25:00 AM
Life dances in your words Paulette like the dust dancing in the air with the Eternal Hope woven through every line. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of hope!
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Date: 2/18/2022 4:23:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comments! :)Paulette
Date: 2/15/2022 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations. Such a beautiful poem.
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Date: 2/18/2022 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Marilene~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 2/14/2022 6:59:00 PM
Soul’s eternal, our twin flames are always with us vibrationally, for love alone is the true God-essence. Beautiful write, Paulette, congrats on your win
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Date: 2/18/2022 4:24:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 2/14/2022 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Paulette. I especially love the beginning, with dust dancing in the light. Best of wishes, Evelyn
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Date: 2/18/2022 4:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Evelyn. I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 2/14/2022 3:08:00 PM
Paulette, congratulations on your Second Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your wonderful poem ~ Constance
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Date: 2/14/2022 5:17:00 PM
Constance I am so elated by my placement in your contest. I admire and respect your work and feel that being recognized is an honor. Thank You! :)Paulette
Date: 2/10/2022 1:57:00 AM
Paulette, this is a lovely celebration of life...Delice
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Date: 2/10/2022 12:06:00 PM
Thank you.....memories are a great comfort. :)Paulette
Date: 2/4/2022 6:06:00 PM
Like this form & your content lots. U have celebrated love on land & sea. Airplanes? The first part about dust is so evocative. So descriptively what dust can do - persistence in light
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Date: 2/4/2022 7:26:00 PM
Hi Anil~this is the first Dizain I ever attempted~a bit tricky but I really enjoyed the challenge. Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 2/3/2022 5:34:00 PM
Time, space and fate, cannot take away treasured memories: "Savory delights with wine you would pour, We both knew, I loved you and you loved me." Beautiful!
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Date: 2/4/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Joe~yes memories are like fine wine they grow more precious with age. Thanks for stopping by to comment. I hope all is well. Blessings,Paulette
Date: 2/3/2022 4:16:00 PM
Hello Paulette, like the format And content, raises memories In me by suggestion, very well done'
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Date: 2/3/2022 4:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment~hearing "very well done" is very up lifting. Take Care, Paulette
Date: 2/3/2022 10:20:00 AM
Great Dizain, Paulette, love the imagery you created. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/3/2022 11:11:00 AM
Thank you for your complimentary comments. This was my first Dizain, quite a challenge~glad you enjoyed it. :) Paulette
Date: 2/3/2022 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful, moving, skillfully written piece conveying a message of longing, Paulette. Janice
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Date: 2/3/2022 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Janice. This was my first Dizain~quite challenging, but glad I was able to convey it with poetic precision. Thanks so much for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 2/3/2022 3:43:00 AM
Ah, don't know where this one came out of , but it makes my heart sad and affected, you opened the door to death in a way that is uniquely yours, Have a beautiful day dear friend :)
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Date: 2/3/2022 6:39:00 AM
You warm my heart with your complimentary comments~I write from my heart and experience. Blessings my dear friend, Paulette
Date: 2/2/2022 7:37:00 PM
Even when death separates, there is the hope of resurrection. Till the living and the death meet, there are sweet memories to cherish. Beautifully composed Paulette!
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Date: 2/3/2022 6:42:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement, this was my first Dizain and your comments so uplifting~ Blessings, Paulette
Date: 2/2/2022 3:24:00 PM
Nicely done Paulette--All the best.
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Date: 2/3/2022 6:43:00 AM
Vijay, as always I appreciate your stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 2/2/2022 3:13:00 PM
Wow Paulette, you chose a moving title from the prayer to express your feelings in this incredible Dizain. I have never written one I don’t think. They look very challenging. This brought back memories. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/3/2022 6:45:00 AM
Hi Connie, yes, it was a challenge and this was my first one~ I am glad I was able to express it with the impact I intended. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 2/2/2022 1:54:00 PM
Very nice writing, Paulette. I loved the way your poem began and then, ended. Dizains can be quite puzzling, while yours is delightful.
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Date: 2/3/2022 6:47:00 AM
Milton your comments have me on cloud nine. This was my first attempt at a Dizain, you are right, "quite puzzling". I had to keep reminding myself of the form while trying to express my thoughts. Glad you found it "delightful". :) Paulette
Date: 2/2/2022 12:59:00 PM
this is SO nice. Very poetic!! and poignant
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Date: 2/2/2022 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, this is my first Dizain, took me a while but I enjoyed the challenge. Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

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