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Boulevard of The Beloved Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Ink Empress. Date written: 09/04/2026

As You Melt Into Me


        tie me to your tongue
                               as you melt into me.

                ever so softly, my sweet,
         whisper my name as you linger
                  in my loving embrace;
feel the warmth of my breath on your face.

             chest to chest, can you feel 
       my heartbeats against yours as we
                 surge through the pulse
             of passion's flickering flame?

        tie me to your tongue 
                               as you melt into me.

         come closer to me, i implore thee,
 let's stay the night under the jealous moon.
           as your hungry eyes meet mine,
           let me taste heaven in your kiss.

      yes,  my beloved, kiss me to resurrect
         a dormant desire that used to rage
             like a hurricane. let our hearts
     be carefree as twilight grows feet to run.

        tie me to your tongue 
                               as you melt into me.
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September 20, 2026 at 11:16 PM
Dear EI This is so sensuous, and soft spoken, and so well flowed, I felt the emotional depth of this poem and I didnt want this to end. "that used to rage like a hurricane. let our hearts be carefree as twilight grows feet to run." Awwn that is so sweet! And because of poems like this ~ it reminds me constantly to stay in love with poetry as poetry will never forsake us. Pleasure reading this Congratulations on your win Fave Sending you light
Ibeh Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 5:22 AM
As always, thank you so much for the wonderful feedback, visit, and fave, Inky:-) I'm so glad you you found this poem of mine worthy of faving, my friend.
George Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 9:41 AM
Intensely passionate and explicitly sensuous, the plea of a love laden heart longing insatiably for a tight embrace and a deep kiss. Beautifully penned dear Edward. As the poem progresses, the desire gathers strength of a hurricane.
Ibeh Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 5:17 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and visit, dear Valsa🙏
Smith  Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 5:39 PM
A sensuous, incantatory free verse poem whose repeated refrain creates a hypnotic, melting rhythm. The intimate imagery—breath, heartbeats, kisses, flame, moonlight, and hurricane—builds passion beautifully while the varied indentation gives the lines a visually fluid, breath-led movement.
Ibeh Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 5:16 AM
Thank you very much for the awesome feedback and visit, Alison🙏
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