As Sunflowers

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Joshua 23:8 But cleave unto the LORD your God, as ye have done unto this day.

April 19, 2021
Edited on August 29, 2024

Sunflowers swaying going along wind waltzes~~~ petals keep cleaving... ...as faith* that clings to the Lord midst afflicting trials' angst~~~ serving with blest glow *1 Corinthians 2:5 - That your faith should not stand in the wisdom of men, but in the power of God. April 19, 2021

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/20/2021 7:46:00 AM

I love your phrasing, "wind waltzes" and the image of petals cleaving in the midst of the challenge.