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I watch the splendor of a shooting star and breathe the beauty of a hum-guitar Her light in flight is like a million lanterns on a cooling night I dream awhile beneath the tarp of heaven then close my eyes & slowly count to seven I wish in true for souls renew and soon I’m covered in night’s dew I loose the mind and pry his realm it`s an expedience of God’s mystic dream When free I see the beauty of his creation for all eternity I watch the splendor of a bird in flight and breathe the beauty of a blessed night His wings they sing to me of freedom, and all a night can bring; If only we can learn to sing Like a Cardinal on a string! Written by: Mystic Rose June 24, 2015 As Starlight Falls Answer All from this promise that renews God's light spills forth to claim it's due when curtains rise from darkened skies warmth returns and starlight dies Dreams awake to breathe the light with sounds of life that takes to flight as song birds sing in praise to bring all honor to this new day's king To rise and walk in peaceful bliss with all this wonder none should miss from thee to be of heart that all this world might see In wisdom may each soul possess a knowledge earned from nothing less than God's own hand that grants this man a will to understand If one could but recall the words from songs of love the starlight's heard Answer Me Contest by Mystic Rose 04/08/2016

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:45:00 AM
Charlie, Congrats on your win in Mystic's contest. *LINDA*
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Date: 4/28/2016 6:09:00 AM
Thank you Linda...
Date: 4/26/2016 12:02:00 PM
Wonderful Win...wonderful poem! Congratulations :)
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Date: 4/26/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Ingrid, so kind of you to take the time to visit and respond. I truly appreciate your thoughtfulness...
Date: 4/25/2016 5:06:00 AM
Greetings Charlie. Congrats for your well, deserved #1 placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/25/2016 6:16:00 AM
Thank you Teddy, I appreciate your visit and encouragement...
Date: 4/22/2016 4:54:00 AM
Wonderful poetry n win.. big congrats Charlie..
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Date: 4/22/2016 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. UPma for your kind words...
Date: 4/22/2016 1:54:00 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on u win.wish u nice days ahead..........hugs.
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Date: 4/22/2016 6:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Manmath I appreciate your encouragement....
Date: 4/21/2016 7:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win Charlie. Good work
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Date: 4/21/2016 7:47:00 PM
Thank you Curtis...
Date: 4/21/2016 2:42:00 PM
Great write and win Charlie..Congrats
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Date: 4/21/2016 3:05:00 PM
Many thanks Joseph...
Date: 4/21/2016 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations Charlie on your win! Very nicely written...
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Date: 4/21/2016 3:05:00 PM
Thank You Meenakshi
Date: 4/21/2016 11:11:00 AM
Hi, Charlie, this is such a lovely and inspiring poem. Congratulations on your First Place win in the 'answer' contest. 7, Sandra
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Date: 4/21/2016 11:59:00 AM
You are so kind Sandra, Thank You...
Date: 4/13/2016 8:21:00 PM
This leaves one breathless with its beauty, Charlie !! So romantic, and lovely !! Good luck in the contest! (And thank you very much for stopping by my poems)!! :)
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Date: 4/13/2016 8:41:00 PM
Carrie it was my pleasure to have read your work. I look forward to more to come. Your note is so kind and I really appreciate your encouraging words. Thank you, my very best to you, Charlie...
Date: 4/13/2016 4:08:00 PM
very nicely done, Charlie!! For me this was a difficult challlenge. I am not sure, but I think you have to copy and paste Mystic's poem at the top in order to qualify. so go do it (if that is what her rules say!!)
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Date: 4/13/2016 6:06:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I don't think that was stated in the rules but I took your advice and did it anyway. Thanks again, Charlie
Date: 4/13/2016 12:57:00 PM
Excellently expressed the star light Falls. A clear 7 i feel. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/13/2016 2:06:00 PM
BL, your kindness and encouragement can't be exceeded. Peace to you my friend and Thank you, Charlie
Date: 4/12/2016 5:27:00 PM
Reads like a winner..It has good flow, rhythm and rhyme..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 4/12/2016 7:59:00 PM
It's always a pleasure to visit your page Sara, thank you for your kind note...
Date: 4/12/2016 12:28:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Charlie ! - I wish you good luck in the contest - Vie Rose will love it for sure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/12/2016 12:32:00 PM
You changed your picture. It matches your notes. Thank you Anne-Lise...
Date: 4/12/2016 11:48:00 AM
Bravo Charlie ! Wonderful write.
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Date: 4/12/2016 12:30:00 PM
You are very kind Lenny, thank you...
Date: 4/11/2016 9:18:00 PM
That is excellent work! Beautiful, indeed..
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Date: 4/11/2016 9:32:00 PM
Appreciate it Larry, thank you...
Date: 4/11/2016 1:50:00 PM
Charlie, a great response poem, you matched her form perfectly, I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 4/11/2016 2:34:00 PM
Thank you love, I so appreciate your encouragement...
Date: 4/11/2016 1:48:00 PM
Such an amazing poem..Very beautiful !I'm glad you have visited our isle in past years : )
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Date: 4/11/2016 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine, it was a pleasurable visit...
Date: 4/10/2016 7:18:00 PM
Oh this is enchanting Charlie. I hope it is right up there at the top. I loved it! :) #7
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Date: 4/10/2016 7:23:00 PM
You are too kind Connie. With notes like yours, it's already won....
Date: 4/10/2016 3:12:00 PM
Great poem. You conveyed it eloquent. Excellent..........A.M.
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Date: 4/10/2016 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Afolabi...
Date: 4/10/2016 11:08:00 AM
Very good write Charlie...Which poem is this answer to?...
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Date: 4/10/2016 6:46:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, I guess you saw the contest list...
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Joseph May
Date: 4/10/2016 4:28:00 PM
OK I got it
Date: 4/9/2016 12:17:00 PM
Charlie, lovely poem with great imagery..good luck! -luloo :)
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Date: 4/10/2016 8:04:00 AM
Thank you for visit and encouragement, Charlie
Date: 4/8/2016 10:45:00 PM
The title caught my eye! After reading this I know why...Nice Write!
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Date: 4/8/2016 10:47:00 PM
Thank you Walter...

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