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As She Was Climbing In the Trees

She found a husband and her keys, So threw a party and a ball (And cheered so hard it made her sneeze). She found a husband and her keys As she was climbing in the trees. I kind of worried that she’d fall. She found a husband and her keys, So threw a party and a ball. For Sara’s zeugma contest

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Date: 9/29/2014 8:35:00 AM
Congrats on this one which made me chuckle..Thanks for entering my contest..Sara..Sorry so long in thanking each person personally..
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win on this triolet Jack. love phyl
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Date: 9/22/2014 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Jack. You did a wonderful job on this Zeugma, Triolet.
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Date: 9/22/2014 8:14:00 AM
and like this wonderful triolet she made it to the top. Nice going.
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Date: 9/5/2014 11:18:00 AM
this is so good Jack, truly enjoyed
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Date: 8/23/2014 4:37:00 PM
Light and witty triolet! She is lucky to have not only found her keys, but a husband as well!! gl in contest. // paul
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Date: 9/22/2014 2:16:00 PM
...and gl turns to congratulations on finishing at the top of the winners' list!!
Date: 8/21/2014 12:03:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your Triolet, Jack...I know it will do well in the contest also, dear friend, Love to you and Dawn. xxAnnalise
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Date: 8/17/2014 1:23:00 AM
This was a fun read, jack! That was a cute touch with that third line-- achoo! Thank you for saying what you said about my tanka-- I am glad you also liked my title for it! Have a good weekend! :)
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Date: 8/16/2014 9:37:00 PM
this is a nonsense rhyme, kind of like those nursery rhymes we grow up on but a bit more adult! It's cool, jack.
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Date: 8/16/2014 7:20:00 PM
I love it Jack...Very well done....Tim
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Date: 8/16/2014 6:22:00 PM
Wonderfully obscure jack. Nice to hear from you.
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:05:00 PM
Wonderful Jack, I was thinking of trying this contest but it seemed too difficult, you have inspired me ~~
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