As Seen Through My Screen Door

Through the mesh of myriad squares,
that filters both vision and sun.
I look upon the world out there,
as each new day has begun.

Trees sway in the pattern,
as roses bloom beyond the veil.
I hear the birds conversing,
while in my home, safe and well.

If someone comes a calling,
I need not let them in.
The screen door has a latch.
A "Keep Out" guardian.

Here a peaceful calm resides,
within my field of vision.
No signs of crime or traffic noise.
No interaction intrusion.

The world shows me just beauty,
its best foot forward impression.
Hiding from me its ugly side,
the one of dying compassion.

Wooden frame and mesh my savior.
When I cry at my very core,
I look out through the world's mask,
as seen through my screen door.


Paula Swanson 
7/15/2011

For the contest, It's Mask Time!
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud
Placement: 5th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dufresne Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 6:18 PM
now this is beautiful poetry Paula. Congratulations to you
Sweetheart Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 3:57 PM
Congrats Paula on another awesome win with yet another creative masterpiece my friend.. always enjoy your creative lines luv...
Swanson Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Thank you Linda
Brown Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Mask" contest Paula. Love, Carol
Swanson Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Thank you Carol
Freeman Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 3:28 PM
Paula, Congratulations on your accomplished entry. Agape, Moses
Swanson Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 7:43 PM
If this one doesn't score high, I will be very surprised. Way to do the contest challenge, Paula. An unusual topic but thinking outside the box. LUv, Andrea
Swanson Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Thank you Andrea. I tend to go so far outside the box at times, that I can't get back in
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