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They hide behind mountains of ignorance, judging within a valley of selfish love. Among weeds where flowers refuse to grow, to the mercy of hypocrites - only we can set them free. As we poets prepare our pens, in the ceremony of a new dawn, let us flow like a million petals, spreading peace through our fingertips, because our hearts beat the same. When they fire bullets at those already wounded, let us swim within sapphire seas of serenity, healing through the purity of compassion - we can beat them at their own game. As twilight signals a new dawn, an abundance of colourful sparkles, infiltrate silent stars, disturbing their reverie, but the moon gazes in admiration, as illuminations brighten horizons. In hope of a beautiful new sunrise, tomorow can be the first day to strum heavenly strings, singing lullabies of peace.
Silent One Simple Musing 01/01/2019 Hope everyone has a great start to 2019, hope all your hopes, dreams and aspirations come true.

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Date: 1/28/2019 2:24:00 PM
One thing we all need - Peace, and freedom of expression. I've been reading a lot of your poetry and it sounds like your work is becoming more universal. You do have your more introspective works, which I enjoy too, but I like the pathways that you are taking with your pen lately. Sorry I am not around here as much. I'm trying to get to reading some of my favorite poets on here today. I've been a busy bee, but I will always make time for some good poetry! Always, Laura
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Date: 1/25/2019 8:18:00 AM
Helllo Silent One, it would be nice to have the world in peace and not pieces. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:31:00 PM
"let us swim within sapphire seas of serenity, healing through the purity of compassion -" I love this image...and sapphires...a very enjoyable read.
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Date: 1/5/2019 11:21:00 PM
Hi again, Another beauty! You should publish a book of your romantic poems and autograph them, i can promise you the queue would wind round almost eternity! Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/5/2019 10:00:00 AM
"only we can set them free." - SO, I do think we were placed in the path of our feelings to write poetry and help the world learn to be universally loved and respected. Nicely done my friend! Wow!
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Date: 1/5/2019 7:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem. There are so many fascinating lines...very descriptive. Nicely done!
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Date: 1/5/2019 2:05:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem Silent, so inspiring and 'let us flow like a million petals' this line sends shivers down my spine, thank you so much an absolute Fav for me!! With kindest thoughts for 2019 from Ann xx
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Date: 1/4/2019 8:30:00 PM
Beauty may have killed the beast, but there will never be a beast that can kill the beauty...that comes from a pen. Well done, SO. Wonderful poetry...Charlie
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Date: 1/4/2019 10:17:00 AM
Hi Silent, such a beautiful and honest write. Your feelings flow so freely down the page. What a joy to see a world of peace. The poets pen can sing so strongly. Another simple musing that is the strongest light. Words can sing with such power. Let love and light forever shine from our pens. A fave my friend. Have a wonderful friday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 1/3/2019 7:33:00 PM
We will succeed
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Date: 1/3/2019 2:41:00 PM
"As We Poets Prepare Our Pens"...love that line and how true.
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Date: 1/3/2019 8:27:00 AM
This is so beautiful. Lovely poetry. HaPpY New Year....
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Date: 1/3/2019 6:15:00 AM
Not many hide only the accusers
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Date: 1/2/2019 7:38:00 PM
Yes, lets. "let us flow like a million petals, spreading peace through our fingertips,"
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Date: 1/2/2019 6:37:00 PM
When words spill from your pen, there is peace. Such a comforting thought indeed. This is so beautiful and uplifting. You are a light my friend. Keep shining. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/2/2019 6:24:00 PM
Let peace reign this new year. Your poem offers much joy Silent! I wish you the best new year! xxoo : )
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Date: 1/2/2019 4:28:00 PM
"The pen is mightier than the sword" for sure if we can follow where you lead Silent.
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Date: 1/2/2019 8:20:00 AM
our subtle or bold expressions make us the world's gate-keepers... absolutely invigorating, S.O... sending my hopeful thoughts this new year... huggs
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Date: 1/2/2019 5:02:00 AM
Oh my, how you sing that lullaby of peace, I love it, glad you made it count, I believe you can do this all year round Love xo
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Date: 1/1/2019 10:15:00 PM
Silent, a deeply moving poems, I agree our written words are powerful weapons, well done ~
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Date: 1/1/2019 6:25:00 PM
beautiful and colorful images in this one. I really liked the million petals
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Date: 1/1/2019 5:30:00 PM
This piece is very moving in its theme, tone, and content. S.O. Janice
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Silent One
Date: 1/1/2019 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Janice..
Date: 1/1/2019 4:56:00 PM
Thanks, SO, for your patience, I'm editing my comment accordingly. ((HUGS)))
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Silent One
Date: 1/1/2019 4:58:00 PM
No need to edit.. poetry is subjective... can be interpreted differently..
Date: 1/1/2019 2:30:00 PM
Thank you for setting me straight on the concepts behind this thought provoking write, SO. Whatever the conflict, we do have a duty to resist conflict, by being peacemakers, as much as possible- by word, or speech... It's a tragedy that those in power are immune to the cries of victims they have created. Thank you for a great poem.
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Silent One
Date: 1/1/2019 3:43:00 PM
This poem is more about defeating ruling powers who rule with ignorance, poets have that power... Thank you Aqua..
Date: 1/1/2019 2:00:00 PM
I would certainly join any meaningful effort to bring about peace, Silent One. I like the way the sun is a metaphor for a new light of tranquility. Truly a beautiful write! Happy New Year, Carolyn
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Silent One
Date: 1/1/2019 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn.. The sun is a metaphor for many a poet in so many different ways.. Have a great new year..
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