As One

As One Warm soft sighs mingle with dancing entangled heat The essence of need bears witness to the splendor as two become one at last
For the contest: Love Note Sponsored by Rick Parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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George   Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 6:36 PM
Beautiful, Paula, Many congrats on your top notch win. Elaine
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 5:33 PM
gorgeous love poem, Paula. Sorry I have not seen so much of you lately. HOpe you are doing ok. Luv, Andrea
Merryman Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 5:11 PM
Paula, congrats on your win with this passionate tanka! Love, Kim
Richards Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 4:34 PM
Lovely poem, Paula! Nice to see you posting your poems again!!
Gorelick Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Wonderful win! congrats. BG
Manassian Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 10:17 AM
Congrats on your win with this passionate Tanka! :)
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