As One

She is my love and sweetheart- ever now, a part See more at Gen 2:24 & 1:18

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Sean Kelly

Date: 11/10/2008 8:48:00 AM

Brian , just a small adjustment to your " cornerstone piece .... Should read QUEEN .. ? Does this make it a " Morris Minor " adjustment !!!! ....

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/25/2008 9:30:00 AM

Brian - A truly wonderful poem to your wife - I think sometimes in life people forget that their wife/husband is truly their sweetheart - They forget that love is something you caress not posses - Thanks Brian for all your supportive comments and continued friendship - I do treasure them - God Bless

Elaine George

Date: 10/25/2008 9:08:00 AM

Beautiful!, Brian. I am in North Carolina atthe moment with very limited accessto a computer. Lainie

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/25/2008 6:31:00 AM

So precious, so much with so few words. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/25/2008 6:01:00 AM

This says it all...in just a few, lovely words. Nicely put! ~Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/25/2008 3:46:00 AM

Awww, so beautiful and tender. You are very blessed. Love Kristin