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As New Lovers Wake To Meet Dawn's Awaiting Treasures

As New Lovers Wake To Meet Dawn's Awaiting Treasures Waking in Love's glory, he felt and said: With heart swollen, bursting with love for her with her sweet, wonderful smile gazing back With sun casting glow in her waking eyes with soft, tender words uttered as she rose With new adoration, his heart astir with teasing treasures seen at her bare pose With gentle touch, of that first morning's kiss with solemn vow, he shouted- "I Love You". Waking in Love's glory, she felt and said: With immense bliss, praying they never part with eager want, beating in loving heart With sight of his exiting hot shower with promise of his sexual power With true glory in new day's welcomed start within realm of his ivory tower With that gentle touch, that first honeyed kiss with soft solemn vow, she cried- "I Love You". R.J. Lindley April, 17th, 1973 Rhyme, ( Romantic scene, first morn after Love's first sweet feast ) Note: Presenting an old romantic piece. My second presentation of romance, passion and the treasures of love. This is a newly edited version of an old poem from forty-six years ago.

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Date: 10/15/2019 4:23:00 PM
Beautiful pen from a poetic master.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/15/2019 6:42:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. Such praise coming from a great and pure of heart poetess such as you truly and most assuredly are, humbles me.. God bless...
Date: 10/11/2019 3:00:00 PM
The Song of Songs, a new edition or rather a timeless edition. The love that knows no shame, no walls, no limits.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/11/2019 3:51:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I just sent you a soup-mail about your new poem.. And it is a dazzling gem that truly awes me.
Date: 10/11/2019 12:31:00 AM
Robert, Your story told in Romanticism never missed the mark. Forty-six times around the sun only sweetened the pot. -Richard
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/11/2019 12:45:00 PM
Thank you my friend. So very kind of you to gift this inspiring comment. Tho' 46 years it feels to me like its been 96 years. Yet I keep paper handy, pen filled with ink and my muse on standby. That is, when she agrees to do so.....
Date: 10/10/2019 7:39:00 PM
My dear friend, your poem is a tender and intimate portrayal of the shine and promise of new love. Beautiful emotional imagery conveys passionate romance and it’s cherished gifts so eloquently, Robert. A lustrous gem from your treasure trove of poetic artistry. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/11/2019 12:43:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I have so many old, unseen by anybody poems(a few hundred), yet feel I lack the time to ever get them on here to be recorded past my time on this spinning blue marble.
Date: 10/10/2019 10:35:00 AM
Amazing how consistent you are over so many years!!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/11/2019 12:41:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Very glad you think so my friend. A poetic heart can keep its course if it started the true path and although stopped several times, it never wavered from reaching its sought destination.
Date: 10/10/2019 9:30:00 AM
Beautiful my friend
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/11/2019 12:38:00 PM
Thank you my friend. When lead by memory of a love that gave its greatest of treasures, one can only write verses that attempt to match that gifted blessing.

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