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As Men Fight

/ \ / \(............/ doves....f l y...from............\ ( \ ( / (............ \ women's hearts................./ / \ / \ $ $ $ $ $ s e e k i n g peace.

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/20/2023 9:42:00 PM

Well worth the effort Sotto.. Here you portray ( Srrength and weakness ) in the balance of The Male and Female world component..Note I put component.' Singular, for that is the best Descriptive.' Regarding the best results that can Spring from the balance inherent in capabiltys Opposite each to the other.' While a forced Agenda of 'inclusivity??' Overlooks so many Conflicts domestic and military..' Reality plays, yet To; largley deaf and blind composers.'

Ink Empress

Date: 12/19/2023 11:41:00 AM

You always do shape poems very well and i see something very interesting her from doves flying to women and seeking serenity as men fight. So deep and meaningful and i think if this is for brians contest he will definitely love it as you’ve done storytelling In artistic manner that would keep the readers intrigued and fascinated by your poetic prowess! Absolutely loved this unique one. Sending you light and best wishes if this is for the contest

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/19/2023 6:50:00 AM

WOW!!! What a very creative write. Love It... Have a Very Blessed Christmas & New Year 2023.......................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/19/2023 5:39:00 AM

Great message in your art, my friend.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/18/2023 5:29:00 PM

Very well done, my friend. A Shape poem with a great thought-provoking message. I like it! Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/18/2023 2:07:00 PM

I like what you've done here, Sotto, especially the 'seeking peace.' Nicely done...wishing you a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/18/2023 10:48:00 AM

This is a very interesting and though provoking piece of art my friend.. nicely done.