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as long as I see the sky contest

as long as I see the sky I have not been reset or resettled

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 9:59:00 AM

Love the way you expressed your sentiment. Big congrats.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/30/2024 10:14:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2024 6:24:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line :) -

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/30/2024 10:13:00 AM

Many thanks

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/28/2024 6:53:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. interesting write it is. cheers.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/30/2024 10:13:00 AM

Thank you

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/6/2024 11:57:00 AM

..as long it's not thunder storming with dark gloom laden clouds, DD. GL~

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/6/2024 2:02:00 PM

Thanks Anaya, I decided on life hopping and planet hopping instead for this one :)

John Read

Date: 11/6/2024 10:00:00 AM

Hi Dilly it's my first attempt at a Monoku, enjoyed reading yours good luck in the contest. Xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/6/2024 2:01:00 PM

Thank you John, I'll be rooting for you :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/6/2024 3:34:00 AM

Loved you Monoku write. I must read your poems.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/6/2024 2:01:00 PM

Think I have about 1500 Victor - one a day for the next 4 years if you like them :) thank you for your kind comment

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/5/2024 2:15:00 PM

Great one liner Dilly, you are well and truly grounded here, even if sometimes you levitate a few feet in the air, always good to recognise the sky we know, great one for contest, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/5/2024 2:22:00 PM

It's tricky to be unique with 10 syllables to play with, so requires the reader to fill in all the blanks. Haha my levitation skills are quite legendary :) thanks for your comment, appreciated

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/5/2024 11:36:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful Monoku write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away.............

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/5/2024 11:38:00 AM

Thanks Paula, appreciated

Paul Bell

Date: 11/5/2024 11:28:00 AM

You looking at the moon again, I told you about that, the little green men will get you now.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/5/2024 11:38:00 AM

Ahh I'm distinctly not their type :)