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as long as I see the sky

as long as I see the sky . . . I can hope new dawns will come to shine

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Date: 11/30/2024 8:52:00 PM
Congratulations. Yes, new dawn, new beginning.
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Date: 11/30/2024 2:34:00 PM
So much optimism is in this single line, Andrea. A beautiful poem! Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 11/30/2024 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea! Stay hopeful and shiny - don't ever lose that :):)
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Date: 11/30/2024 10:17:00 AM
Yeah! It does have a close look to mine. Congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 11/29/2024 6:24:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning line :) -
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Date: 11/28/2024 6:54:00 PM
congratulations dear poet. 'hopeful and positive' beautiful write. 'shine on'cheers.
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Date: 11/9/2024 5:54:00 AM
Of course that will happen and all because it's you my friend Andrea. VERY WELL PENNED, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/8/2024 5:36:00 PM
Lovely- :) I have been busy, but will catch up
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Date: 11/8/2024 8:35:00 AM
Darkness will evaporate and the sun will shine. Beautiful Monoku. Hugs.
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Date: 11/7/2024 11:17:00 PM
Thank you for this uplifting piece. I surely need it
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Date: 11/7/2024 11:15:00 PM
great message poet
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Date: 11/7/2024 10:15:00 PM
Love this one Andrea. I sent you Soup Mail... Hugs...
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Date: 11/7/2024 5:27:00 AM
Ohh Dear Andrea, What a beautiful and hopeful Monoku!! Thank you for filling my soul this morning. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/7/2024 4:23:00 AM
Sublime, inspirational monoku, Andrea:-) BOL in the contest!
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Date: 11/6/2024 3:03:00 PM
I love the beauty in this hopeful simplicity that belongs in a Hollywood classic. An instant Fav for me.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 3:50:00 PM
Wow. Thanks so much
Date: 11/6/2024 1:17:00 PM
Theres always a dawn waiting to unveil beams of hope sweet andrea, your monoku flows with hope in such a soulful manner. So uplifting! Pleasure reading this gem. Best wishes.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 3:51:00 PM
Thanks, Sweetie
Date: 11/6/2024 11:26:00 AM
- Optimistic ... we must never lose hope - GL in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 12:07:00 PM
thanks, Anne Lise.
Date: 11/6/2024 11:01:00 AM
Hopeful Monoku
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Date: 11/6/2024 10:06:00 AM
I share your hopes Andrea. Tom
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Date: 11/6/2024 7:54:00 AM
Hi Andrea, the older I get, I'm thankful I'm still here to see the same thing, have a lovely day. Xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 10:15:00 AM
yes, with emphasis on "the same" things. I don't enjoy some of the changes I see going on.

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