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Written for the Monoku contest sponsored by Jcb Brul

as long as I see the sky…I'll lace love with specks of moon-swept silver

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/11/2024 11:04:00 AM

Beautiful ! very romantic ~

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/30/2024 3:05:00 PM

Beautifully and imaginatively composed, dear Ink. Warmest congratulations on your win. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 9:53:00 AM

As I go down the list, I see yours is the loveliest. Congrats, Sweetie . Got your email explanation. Yep, you are right

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2024 6:26:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line, Ink :) - hugs

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/28/2024 6:47:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. enchanting write. love it. cheers.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/25/2024 12:46:00 PM

IE, a great motto and attitude for living a happy life. No matter what happens you provide useful wisdom to those willing to practice love and kindness toward others. It's a good way to love ourselves as well.

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 11/16/2024 12:15:00 AM

A great one- liner ,dear poet. Have a great weekend!!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/13/2024 5:22:00 AM

Hi Empress! Herein i waspropelled to cross the galaxy! Wonderful! Love U, sally

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/11/2024 7:37:00 AM

IE, beautiful and very welcome. Nature has a lot to give. It's nice to take it in without damaging it. What you are talking about fits the bill and brings smiles!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/9/2024 7:29:00 AM

What a delightful one-liner, Empress! May you enjoy many more romantic moon-swept nights! ~ [love the avatar...reminds me of my muse!] ~ Warm regards // paul

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2024 10:26:00 AM

So good to hear from you dear paul, thank you so much for the wish and also for compliments on my picture: who is your muse? Thats a very kind thing to say: thank you once again, truly grateful

Paige Hind

Date: 11/8/2024 5:54:00 PM

Lovely- <3 a sure winner, if you ask me

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2024 10:24:00 AM

Awwn thank you sweet soul

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/7/2024 11:27:00 AM

Oh, Dear Empress, why I fell in love with this monoku was the alliterations that you used. It is romantic, beautiful, and full of Laced Love. This is what amazing poetry is about, as I lace it up as a FAV. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Ink Empress
Date: 11/9/2024 10:24:00 AM

That is so kind of you dear daniel, always an honor to hear from you really. Thank you so very much truly

Valsa George

Date: 11/6/2024 11:36:00 PM

So beautiful....and so poetically expressed, dear friend. I wanted to enter this contest. By the time, I came up with my thoughts, the contest got closed. All the Best!

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:38:00 AM

Awwn yes monoku contests fill up fast and it was so inspiring: thank you my dear sweet valsa. Appreciate you always

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/6/2024 4:13:00 PM

What beautiful imagery - fantastic fantasy! A top contender xo ~ Anaya

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:33:00 AM

Awwn thank you dear anaya always grateful to have you here

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2024 3:38:00 PM

Perfecto

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:31:00 AM

Awwn thank you sweet andrea

Joseph May

Date: 11/6/2024 3:08:00 PM

Very nicely expressed

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:29:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear joseph

John Read

Date: 11/6/2024 1:58:00 PM

So much meaning in so few words, good luck in the contest Ink.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:28:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear John, grateful for your support always

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 11/6/2024 9:55:00 AM

as long as I see the sky…I'll lace love with specks of moon-swept silver… oooo papi!!! Lace me now!!! Lace me goooooood!!!! Wat a gorgeous piece of monokuuuuu !! Love it!! Love the love ooozing here !!

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:25:00 AM

Awwn papiii you da best

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/6/2024 8:21:00 AM

Vividly descriptive and expressive, Ink! Janice

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:21:00 AM

So good to hear from you always dear janice thank you so much

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/6/2024 6:05:00 AM

beautiful dear poet.

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:13:00 AM

Thank you so much dear poet

Tom Woody

Date: 11/6/2024 5:39:00 AM

Uplifting and sweet inky. Have a happy day

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:13:00 AM

Thank you so much tomsz

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/6/2024 5:33:00 AM

... lovely ... // hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:11:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment

Deb M

Date: 11/6/2024 5:18:00 AM

Ahh such beauty and imagery in one little sentence sweet Ink! Specks of moon-swept silver….so pretty and romantic……just lovely!! Debx

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:09:00 AM

Dear debx its always so good to hear from you; thank you so very much truly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2024 4:33:00 AM

Ahhh!! Nice one. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:08:00 AM

Thank you dear sara

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/6/2024 3:49:00 AM

Ink Empress, your beautiful Monoku speaks to the beauty of the universe and lands on my mind ever so sweetly! Good Luck in the contest and Happy Wednesday xxoo

Ink Empress
Date: 11/7/2024 1:08:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear mike, grateful to receive your feedback. Sending you light always