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As I Watch the Waves Crash Poetry Contest

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I sense intent, it drifts on the air Increasing my awareness Holding me there Negative ions, relax my thought Positive impact Distinctly less fraught I feel power from the water Rest and surge Strong as Nereus' daughter The waves crash wildly below I'm conscious, I'm listening But what should I know I sense intent, it drifts on the air Transference of strength These struggles I can bear

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Paige Hind

Date: 10/10/2023 5:43:00 PM

Enjoyed this. I liked the triumph found in the last lines.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/10/2023 10:36:00 PM

Many thanks Paige x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/9/2023 1:00:00 PM

A lovely write. I love to hear the waves. Good Luck... Have a great/blessed day writing away.................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/9/2023 1:08:00 PM

Thanks Paula - they have a healing energy as long as you stood in the right place x

Karen Jones

Date: 10/9/2023 6:42:00 AM

Lovely. I enjoy hearing the poem. Is that your voice? You read with such great intonation if so. Great contest entry!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/9/2023 6:46:00 AM

Thanks Karen, yes but I have a sore throat and a habit of stumbling mid poem haha. I'm trying to get better, so reading them and trying to force a bit of expression outside of my comfort zone is my aim.