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As Good As It Gets

Mostly still in sleep’s valley, You doze in my arms As the light of day blossoms Revealing more charms. And your breath has a rhythm, Occasional sound, Like the rustle that leaves make When breeze rakes the ground. I can feel my blood rising To welcome the day, Though the challenge of aging Does not go away. There’s a weakness of body And creaking of soul, That reminds us life’s fragile Love charges a toll. We pay fee without thinking Until it is gone, Like a child that is missing Or friend’s life bygone. Witness hope we’re immortal The smile on my face! Each day’s prospect of blessing Puts faith in right place. If a man’s soul exists then Does death have a sting? Those who rest in Love’s arms need To fear anything? And if man has no soul then Your death ends it all, There’s no Hell or hereafter For us to appall. Should we trust God is real then Or swear He is not? Well, He MIGHT not exist but Where’s value in thought? Take a walk in a garden When feeling alone, And if friends do not call then Just pick up the phone. I’ve found God’s fond of sharing If I want to hear, And when I REALLY need Him He lends me his ear! If you think you’re not worthy Your head is on straight, Know it’s Grace that is key to Unlocking the gate. Are you shy? Tap on windows Or knock on His doors! But already you’re loved by The God who adores. Long Tooth March 4, 2017

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Date: 3/7/2017 12:21:00 AM
I swear to you I read this 4 times, then stood up and applauded. In my mind, I did, I did stand up and clap. FAV 7 This poem is crafted by a human spark of divinity and I love it! Talent. Bravo to you from me in this moment. Wow ... CayCay
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Date: 3/7/2017 1:31:00 PM
The title is the key to where this poem goes. Honestly it started as a love poem and the deep feeling of appreciation, the humility I feel at being loved by my girl friend, but the title compelled me to explore other ways I feel loved. I do love too though that you loved it so much! Thanks CayCay!

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