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As Endless As the Sky

With rags to back his weary bones he wondered not the why Such answers bear a pondering as endless as the sky For those deserving of the world are often left behind While those of seeming little need have all they hope to find With judgement not of man’s concern at least not meant to be He knew that life was not about the singular of me I hope to one day find the thoughts that gather my regard And learn the lesson he has lived though battle bruised and scarred

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Valsa George

Date: 7/29/2023 10:08:00 PM

We do not know what is in store for us. The turn of fate is unpredicatable. Many who deserve to live a happy life are dumped down to deep pits while those who don't deserve are lifted so high. This homeless oldman has the right attitude to life . He carries his scars as trophies. Beautifully uplifting poem, dear Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/30/2023 4:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Valsa, Happy Sunday xxoo

Christina Bowring

Date: 7/29/2023 9:16:00 AM

A wonderful, thought provoking and well written rhyme Mike. I love the line,’With judgement not of man’s concern’. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/30/2023 4:51:00 AM

Thank so much Christina !!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2023 10:46:00 AM

Hello Mike the homeless have a hard life. They have no where to turn for help. Happy Friday my friend. xxxx-oooo. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2023 11:30:00 AM

Hello Mike, yes it is sad. I sense that things should get better for them. Happy Weekend. xxxx-oooo./Darlene\

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/22/2023 4:08:00 AM

So true and very sad!! Happy Saturday Darlene xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2023 3:31:00 PM

such a thought provoking powerful piece Mike hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/20/2023 3:40:00 PM

Thank you Jan xxoo

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/20/2023 7:20:00 AM

Mike..a friend of mine said…we are all the walking wounded. I get his point.in some way. all of us have been hurt in life to varying degrees. Me, too.I had to get off the ground after every punch,so does all humanity . Scars make us stronger, honestly. I used thar line that I think is true, zTurm your scars into stars, that man will find his way. I have a known a homeless man who lived in a shelter and what he became a millionaire..Awesome. He worked hard! Pangie Beautifully crafted poem!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/20/2023 8:00:00 AM

Also, no one in the USA goes without food examples~food stamps! a monthly stipend free health care. Clothes can be gotten free through Churches. Plus all get a cell phone. Hey, I never got that! Schools have free lunches! In my state, you can steal up to 925 dollars from any store as well. That’s why businesses are leaving CA. And 500,000 fled this state as races are nutz, Too bad work has become a sin? When I was little my Dad scared me, “those who don’t work do not eat.” So, I did not ask for freebies. There are tons of jobs available. Pangie

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/20/2023 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Pangie! I am happy to hear the the homeless to millionaire story!! I definitely agree , Scars to Stars!! what a terrific attitude , thank you for sharing!!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/19/2023 2:12:00 PM

Well written Mike! Flows so well too and powerful :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/20/2023 6:55:00 AM

Thank you Heidi! You have always been so supportive, i really appreciate it xxoo Happy Thursday!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/19/2023 8:56:00 AM

Great meter and rhyme, Mike! I enjoyed this! Blessings, Kim M

Mike Gentile
Date: 7/19/2023 11:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim!!!