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A spent sun withdraws from a sanguine sky into the ebony blackness of space. And birds roosting in trees no longer fly as a ghost moon rises to find its place, smiling down on Earth with a friendly face. Chameleon clouds, crimson, and cerise graze the horizon like woolly pink sheep. And as the last rays of sunlight decrease billions of stars awaken from their sleep, while shape-shifting shadows stealthily creep. As silhouettes merge, dusk's darkness descends, blurring the edges as night's curtain drops. And as the day's chatter silently ends twinkling stars morph into glittering props, and the show continues; it never stops. A cricket's chirp announces the next act; nocturnal players scurry to the stage. And as moonbeams and fireflies interact; owls and bats exercise their wings backstage, and all diurnal actors disengage.

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Date: 5/6/2022 10:33:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win. This poem is truly a reflection of your mastery of unique and fresh images. Takes my breath away. Blessings dear friend!
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Date: 5/1/2022 12:49:00 PM
wow, you used this form magnificently, Emile. I love quintains . Such pretty imagery. Congrats. Mine is the only poem not on the list. Wish I knew what I did wrong.
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Date: 5/2/2022 8:35:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate your comments, I'm as surprised as you that your poem didn't make the list, you are such a great poet my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2022 7:11:00 AM
A very beautiful scene created. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/1/2022 8:30:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2022 12:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Emile! Thank you for entering my contest. <3 ~Anna Kaianah
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Date: 7/8/2018 4:15:00 PM
'fireflies and moonbeams' all so lovely, congrats.
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Date: 7/8/2018 6:47:00 PM
Thanks Barbara, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/7/2018 4:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win! Well done.
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2018 10:47:00 AM
Wonderful imagery! Always love anything cerise! A fave, my friend! Congrats!
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Date: 7/6/2018 10:50:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2018 9:17:00 AM
Great imigary , great write :-) congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 7/6/2018 10:50:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2018 12:07:00 AM
especially love the shape-shifting shadows. I think dusk is your favourite time as you describe it so amazingly. love always
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Date: 7/6/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Virginia, I appreciate your wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2018 12:06:00 AM
Strong n touchy poem on emerging night. Congrats n Love
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Date: 7/6/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, I appreciate your kind support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/5/2018 9:58:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your podium finish, Emile.
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Date: 7/6/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/5/2018 9:06:00 PM
Delicate, yet simultaneously powerful, portrayal of night descending, Emile. Kudos to you on your win in the contest! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/6/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Gershon, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/5/2018 8:14:00 PM
Lovely imagery, rhythm, and rhyme, Emile. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/5/2018 7:16:00 PM
Great imagery in your poem; I especially love the grazing clouds. Congrats on your win, Emile.
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thanks Agnes, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/23/2018 11:53:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Emile, I especially loved the last stanza.
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Date: 6/25/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, I appreciate your kind words of support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/22/2018 10:59:00 PM
Emile, a beautiful and descriptive piece with perfect word selection, line development, and setting sun picture. You truly are one of the best poets here!
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Date: 6/23/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thanks so much Lyric Man, I appreciate your kind words of support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/22/2018 12:45:00 PM
smooth like freefall....elegant charming rhyme.God bless.
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Date: 6/22/2018 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Rajat Kanti, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/22/2018 9:53:00 AM
Very well written Emile. :)
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Date: 6/22/2018 11:25:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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