Darkness Descends

A spent sun shimmies down a sanguine sky, into the ebony blackness of space. And birds roosting in trees no longer fly, while a full moon rises to find its place; smiling down on Earth with a friendly face. Chameleon clouds, crimson, and cerise, graze the horizon like woolly pink sheep. And as ruby rays of sunlight decrease, slumbering stars awaken from their sleep; while shape-shifting shadows stealthily creep. Silhouettes merge, as dusk's darkness descends; blurring the edges, where night's curtain drops. And as the day's chatter silently ends, billions of stars morph into backstage props; while the show continues, and never stops. A cricket's chirp announces the next act: when nocturnal creatures take center stage. And as moonbeams and fireflies interact, owls and bats start to flex their wings backstage, while the diurnal players disengage.
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Kauffman Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 10:33 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win. This poem is truly a reflection of your mastery of unique and fresh images. Takes my breath away. Blessings dear friend!
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 12:49 PM
wow, you used this form magnificently, Emile. I love quintains . Such pretty imagery. Congrats. Mine is the only poem not on the list. Wish I knew what I did wrong.
Pinet Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate your comments, I'm as surprised as you that your poem didn't make the list, you are such a great poet my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 7:11 AM
A very beautiful scene created. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 8:30 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Kaianah Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 12:33 AM
Congratulations on your win Emile! Thank you for entering my contest. <3 ~Anna Kaianah
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 4:15 PM
'fireflies and moonbeams' all so lovely, congrats.
Pinet Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Thanks Barbara, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
Gentry Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win! Well done.
Pinet Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Wonderful imagery! Always love anything cerise! A fave, my friend! Congrats!
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Great imigary , great write :-) congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Waters Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 12:07 AM
especially love the shape-shifting shadows. I think dusk is your favourite time as you describe it so amazingly. love always
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Thanks Virginia, I appreciate your wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Dutta Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 12:06 AM
Strong n touchy poem on emerging night. Congrats n Love
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Anisha, I appreciate your kind support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your podium finish, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Wolf Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:06 PM
Delicate, yet simultaneously powerful, portrayal of night descending, Emile. Kudos to you on your win in the contest! ~ Gershon
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Gershon, I appreciate your unwavering support my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:14 PM
Lovely imagery, rhythm, and rhyme, Emile. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
Pinet Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Thanks so much Sandra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Krampe Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Great imagery in your poem; I especially love the grazing clouds. Congrats on your win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Thanks Agnes, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Lovely imagery, Emile, I especially loved the last stanza.
Pinet Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Thanks so much Line, I appreciate your kind words of support my friend, Emile.
Man Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 10:59 PM
Emile, a beautiful and descriptive piece with perfect word selection, line development, and setting sun picture. You truly are one of the best poets here!
Pinet Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thanks so much Lyric Man, I appreciate your kind words of support my friend, Emile.
Chakrabarty Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 12:45 PM
smooth like freefall....elegant charming rhyme.God bless.
Pinet Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 5:40 PM
Thanks Rajat Kanti, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Very well written Emile. :)
Pinet Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 11:25 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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