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When love starts slipping away, pretending becomes a chore. And dreams are shrouded in gray, for fantasies are no more. Hope disappeared from your heart the instant he slammed that door. And as your world fell apart, trickling tears began to pour. Like an angel up above, he spoke of forevermore. And yet, abandoning love, he left you pacing the floor. Tears cannot be held at bay; like the waves that wash ashore. And although you wished he'd stay, you're not as sure as before. (Quatrain) 8/13/2015

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Date: 3/8/2018 10:30:00 AM
Beautiful twist, Emile. I love the last two lines "And though you wished he would stay you’re not as sure as before."
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 8/16/2015 11:43:00 AM
In any form of love if it is true, it will weather all the storms. If one looses the bidding, don't forget God is always there
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Date: 8/17/2015 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Samiha, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 8/15/2015 9:29:00 AM
enjoyed the rhymes that feel they are in place, belonging naturally. The emotion of love forsaken draws me to read up to the last line.
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Date: 8/15/2015 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Josefina, your comments and support are appreciated. Emile.
Date: 8/14/2015 2:07:00 PM
awwhh, so sad and beautiful, emile... a most intimate read pining for love lost and gone.. huggs
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Date: 8/14/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette, your kind words are always so supportive. Emile.
Date: 8/13/2015 10:37:00 PM
Wonderful expressions Emile! So well I can relate to this, beautifully sad!
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Date: 8/14/2015 6:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Upma, I always enjoy your visits. Emile.

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