Art - Michelangelo

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Love and Grief
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The love of mother and son depicted in a marble statue,
the Pieta, said to be the most beautiful in Rome to this day;
no corpse could be more life-like-  no mother more sad,
     it resides in St. Peter's Chapel-  behind glass.
     So elegantly beautiful,
     the face of Mary unfathomable and tender;
     the veins and bones of Christ,
                             wonderfully worked.
        Divine the feelings-  I feel . . . 
          The virgin draped in a huge cloak;
with the dead Christ on her lap-  his body limp,
her right hand supports his upper body, gaze lowered,
his right arm, hand and foot dangling . . . 
     Nearly naked, Christ lies in the folds of her cloak;
     lovingly she holds him in death,
     her face etched with compassion.
     Grief so beautifully carved,
                              amazing the artist;
        his name carved in the fastener of her cloak,
          Michelangelo Buonarroti . . . 

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May 6, 2017

Verse/Art- Michelangelo 
Copyright Protected, ID 898394

Written for the contest, Celebration of Art
sponsor, Kim Rodriques

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/26/2017 4:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance - your poem does the sculpture justice.
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Date: 5/25/2017 9:58:00 PM
This is just as lovely upon my second read, Constance. Congrats for your awesome win! Soupmail.
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Date: 5/25/2017 7:19:00 PM
This is wonderful, BW - love it! I have always adored the master sculptors, who can turn stone into the most delicate cloth and most expressive works. In my city there is a very large sculpture by Benjamin Paul Akers called "The Dead Pearl Diver" that I stood in front of for hours as a boy ... The Pieta is a similarly extraordinary work, and I adore it AND the master, Michelangelo. You have captured its essence - congrats! A 7 for sure!
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Date: 5/25/2017 5:34:00 PM
You have captured well the awesome presence of this sculpture Constance. I have viewed it in person and it is very memorable. Congratulations on your deserving first placement! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/25/2017 5:01:00 PM
So lovely, Constance. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Date: 5/25/2017 4:55:00 PM
This is beautifully descriptive. Congratulations on your high placement!
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Date: 5/25/2017 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations, BW! You have captured the imagery of his most exquisite sculpture.
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Date: 5/25/2017 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Well-deserved and a 7! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 5/25/2017 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, BW. As you say elegantly beautiful. You have captured the form and poise of this piece beautifully. // Barry
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Date: 5/25/2017 12:02:00 AM
This was lovely, Constance! Filled with emotion and love the ending!
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Date: 5/24/2017 11:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! Indeed, our PS art gallery is divine! I will return to comment on your individual poem. Blessings...Kim
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Date: 5/7/2017 12:15:00 AM
Wow, Constance, you outdid yourself on this one!! Very well crafted poetry. I sure wish I could get inspired for this one!! SEVEN
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Date: 5/6/2017 6:07:00 PM
I wish I could see the Pieta in reality, but your poem brought it to life as best as the printed word could do.
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