Around the Spindle

A babe, I raise my arms, stretching
     To catch my life book, opening chapters
          Amid my mistakes, I cry dried tears clinging
          Youthful endurance running
     Races not needed; ones needed squandered
Surrendered, hard won lessons
Teenage assurance, swagger sometimes
     Stagger against a roadblock
          Learning the keys to open barred doors
          Adult larvae find freedom, eating truth and trust
     From cocoon to explore shores oppressed
Tastes love, power, choices made, shattered hopes
Middle ground goes around the spindle
     Chasing dreams, setting stakes in the ground
          Fertile flower, barren emptiness
          Waning years, freedoms found, glued anew
     Seeing blossoms scatter in the wind
Closing shutters.  Sending guilt aloft
Aged in a cask, left on a shelf of wisdom lost
     Died up last memories, ripening smell
          Lost my mind in my bodies shell


June 13, 2019
A contest "on Aging"
Sponsor:  Emile Pinet
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Krutsinger Avatar
June 21, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Either you are living with teenagers, or you understand them remarkably well. "Teenage assurance, swagger sometimes Stagger against a roadblock Learning the keys to open barred doors" I remembered my own teenage days INSTANTLY when I read these lines.
Onclaud Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 4:11 PM
deep insights through life's journey, jeanne.. nice one!...huggs
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