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When Death Comes

I want to believe that when I die, my soul goes through a tunnel of light. And rising in its spiral embrace, angels will take away all my fears. God's everlasting love will anoint and sanctify my eternal soul. And bathed in His grace and purity, I'll be free of temptation and sin. Exhalation will define death's touch as it transports my immortal soul. And instantly, I'll be in heaven, assured of my immortality. Cutting earthly ties; my spirit will slip away from my earthly body. And cradled in the arms of rapture, I'll bask amidst the glory of God. I'd like to believe all of that's true, but unfortunately, I do not. What I do believe is I'm mortal, and when death comes, life merely blinks out. (Blank Verse) 4/30/2017

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:09:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/2/2017 1:01:00 AM
A spiritual journey which we should all aspire for when the time comes. Beautiful poem Emile.
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Date: 5/2/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Maria, your comments and support are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2017 3:12:00 PM
Hi Emile , Beautiful description of slipping away , the beauty of life is the beauty of death :)) hugs my friend , rate 7
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Date: 5/1/2017 5:19:00 PM
Thanks Niall, your friendly words have made my day a little brighter, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2017 7:32:00 AM
Such a beautiful spiritual write... So neatly penned... A big 7...
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Supraja, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2017 7:23:00 AM
Very spiritual and touching ,Emile. I'm reminded of my brother who passed away last year and I felt the same way for his soul.
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2017 2:21:00 AM
Oh how I wish to die like this sir Emile.Very well described. this subject is my favorite.
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Miraj, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/30/2017 10:48:00 PM
Your soul is your p[poetry., this is so filled with depth and heart!
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Arthur, I appreciate your friendly words of encouragement, Emile.
Date: 4/30/2017 10:04:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments, Emile! About the greatest unknown! Great pen.
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:43:00 AM
Thanks White Wolf, I appreciate your friendly words of encouragement, Emile.

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