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Ari

“Eloi Eloi lama sabachthani?” My hands and nose press against this glass. Behind it, he prowls. Restless, at once. At once, ravenous. I would disappear in his long-toothed caress. I would vanish like drops of water on a blade of grass In the hot savannah sun. They made it perfect for him, inside this glass. They made it perfect; So he would remember the chase. Body of fire, sinews of steel— The hunt begins. Hot breath on tanned skin and jaws that sink deep Into innocent flesh. They put a stucco cave over there. And over here a few rocks, a gnarled tree or two, and of course — His pride. My body melts against this glass. One look from his arrogant gaze and I see those who have scaled these walls; Hurling their bodies like autumn leaves on a crisp day — softly falling. I would fall too. But instead, I fold like origami upon this sterile floor, behind his glass. Both of us restless, at once. At once, both ravenous.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/10/2016 10:08:00 PM
Natasha, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/8/2016 3:02:00 AM
NATASHA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:55:00 PM
Thank you all for the well wishes...some insight to "Ari" - the angst of watching a creature that should be so free, now behind bars...of "his" own creation, so attached to his perfect world...has he been forsaken by a higher power? And what if that creature one was watching, was actually human?
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Date: 2/23/2016 6:20:00 PM
Natasha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/23/2016 7:09:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Natasha - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:51:00 AM
This is a superb piece of writing...and "G-D, G-d, Why hast thou forsaken me?...excellent. I can feel the angst in your words. I don't believe I could survive a trip to the zoo. I do hope to see more.
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:57:00 PM
Natasha, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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