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Argentine Tango - Collaboration

Moonlight captures the freshness of blue but my eyes are affixed to the beauty of you ripples brush rhythmically along with the night my chamber beats faster while I hold you so tight our silence is broken by the sound of my heartbeat your nearness succumbs sending shivers to my feet here the twilight, searches for the words unspoken whispered in my dreams, to a heart that was broken kisses they long, to be felt on your lips strong hands gripping excite on your hips lean into me, lie your chest on my soul you, mi amour, I shall never let go salt tainted tears fill my eyes as I snuggled up close Cariad I mouthed my heart you never shall lose pull into me and push your inhibitions aside in passionate throes our fears cannot hide I entwined my legs round your radiant heat we're making love to an argentine beat sweat runs down my breast as the tempo does rise the climax so deafening with our loud tango cries used Picture No 2 penned 20 December 2017

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Date: 4/21/2018 4:50:00 PM
Belated congrats on your win with this fine collaborative poem, Tim.
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Date: 1/21/2018 4:01:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2018 5:13:00 AM
A beautiful tango Tim...Congrats on your win in my contest..
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Date: 12/22/2017 2:53:00 PM
Great write Tim...Seren
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Date: 12/21/2017 8:07:00 PM
Just WOW... Lol! Tim this is some Argentine tango. Awesome Tim! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 12/21/2017 2:46:00 PM
Saucy hot stuff! Godd luck in the contest :) xomo x2
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Date: 12/21/2017 2:25:00 PM
you and your writing partner have perfected a passionate piece which i hope dances to the top in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/21/2017 2:25:00 PM
Wow this is a great collaboration! Very well done :) Congrats to the both of you!
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Date: 12/21/2017 1:02:00 PM
Oh ..A lovely itense poem...Argentinian tango ..I love that.And who is the one you collabed this awesome poem with?Fantastic ..Both of you!
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