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Are You An Angel

I was nursing in long term care where I worked in the palliative care unit and of course saw many deaths. Sometimes the nurses were the only ones there to be with these elderly souls as they took their last breaths. I recall all of them but there is one in particular that haunts me still but in a good way. I was working the night shift and this lady was close to death. I went to check her and as I was, she opened her eyes and they were bright and happy. She smiled at me and whispered, are you an angel come to bring me to heaven? No, I replied, I am your nurse. She reached up and touched my blonde hair and told me that I had a halo over my head. Perhaps it was the light from the hall or her poor eyesight, I will never know. She was a sweet person who loved to wear her pearls that her husband had given her on their wedding day. She was smiling and told me they were dancing. And when I tried to leave she said don't, please stay with me, so I did. We did not say much, but touched each other, she touched my face saying angel over and over and then, quietly she gasped only once and she was gone. I never forgot that experience. Maybe, God did give me a halo that night to help this soul pass into heaven. I think he did. _________________ July 7, 2021 Poetry/Narrative/Are You An Angel Copyright Protected 07-1369-548-07 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, The Last Dance sponsor, Craig Cornish, Judged 07/16/2021 Seventh Place

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Date: 7/18/2021 12:10:00 PM
I believe you were her angel, and still are, a wonderful poem penned congrats on your win dear Constance. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/19/2021 3:34:00 AM
Mystic, that is what I like to think and not just for her but for the many whose hand I held in their last moment of life, thank you for the compliment and congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/17/2021 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations on a very moving piece.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/17/2021 6:34:00 AM
Terry, thank you for the congratulations and comment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/16/2021 3:01:00 PM
Congrats on your placement. But more than that, the experience with your dying patient was priceless. Blessings.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2021 4:23:00 PM
Curtis, thanks for the congrats, yes, I will never be sorry for the experiences I gathered working in palliative care, it was so humbling and it changed my life ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 7/16/2021 2:24:00 PM
Congratulation on your win. An Amazing story/write. God had you where you needed to be. Maybe you were wearing a halo that night as you were the angel that was so needed. Have a blessed day with your win....................
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2021 4:24:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment. I like to think that I was an angel for that previous soul, that God was touching her through me, wouldn't that be wonderful ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/16/2021 2:21:00 PM
What an amazing poem, Constance! These experiences, although sad, make our life meaningful. "I think he did." - how poignant ending! Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2021 4:26:00 PM
Mala, thanks for the compliment, I like to think that God did give me a halo that night, it was not just that experience but so many similar that made my time working in palliative care so meaningful ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 7/7/2021 10:10:00 PM
What an amazing experience, Constance. I too after retiring took a job in a care home, and there experienced so much, it change my view of life. I can relate to this a beautiful and warm poetry..Good luck in contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/8/2021 5:55:00 AM
Harry, thank you for the compliment. My experience working in palliative care humbled me, the elderly have so much to give and yes, it changes a persons view on life forever ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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