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Are Utopian Dreams Flawless

We are born into a Utopian world where everything lives and let lives Politeness and manners exist as society never lets sieve We learn to live with our neighbours amidst colours that nature has born Living well into our tomorrows without the fear of being war-torn Prejudice has never been heard whilst cussing never nears our ears To walk our streets at whenever, over our shoulder you will never fear, fears When we are born into a Utopian world where everything lives and let lives The reason this can all come about, is purely because everyone gives * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * We are born from a fallopian world where reasons dictate how we live Politeness and manner exist, sadly society has allowed them to sieve Many learn to live with their neighbours amidst colours of nature born Some live into their tomorrows, many enter the doors of war-torn Prejudice appears to be worsening, cussing appears the norm Many are scared to walk our streets as many out there have form When we are born from the fallopian world where reasons dictate how we live We don't enter what we hope is Utopia, many take and rarely give

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Date: 2/23/2011 4:59:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement James, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 3:44:00 PM
Utopian dreams are flawed, becuase mankind cannot agree on even the simplest of things. Very good one for provoking thoughts on this topic. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:20:00 PM
interesting format! a topic open to great discussions congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/6/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your amazing win, James! Our society loves to dictate and keep us from entering Utopia, fearing that it will lose the grip on us! The real Utopia is a world filled with love, kindness, justice and fairness....without these we'll never find it. I have loved reading your thought-provoking poem. Thanks for your continued comments and encouragement. God loves you... :). Peace and Love, Andrew.
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:24:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) James~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:45:00 PM
Great writing James. Congratulaions on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:05:00 PM
So glad to see your poem in the winners' circle,!! Great job, James !Congratulations! love Carrie
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:19:00 AM
Hi James - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:39:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Jim. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, James
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:10:00 AM
Awesome writing, James. Congrat's on your big win. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:00:00 AM
Good to see one of my fav in this top position.Many congratulations for this top win.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:33:00 AM
Congrats James on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:20:00 AM
Well done. Congratulations on your winning position in the contest with this sad, but true poem. Excellent writing. Love, Deb
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:47:00 PM
JAMES, Congratulations on your win~~ THE TITLE.. IS WRONG.. THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT~SKAT
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Date: 1/27/2011 7:43:00 PM
Very nice Couplet...Jimmy
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:19:00 AM
James my dear poet...reverence is surely due to a writer who makes clear what many take for granted ! These words are justified, simply wrapped up in your last verse Sir ! I pray many read this write of yours and take it to heart. Thank you for this awesome inspiring poesy James ! much love, james
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Date: 1/25/2011 1:54:00 AM
Sad to admit that there is so much validity to this write of yours James.. you did it brilliantly my friend
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Date: 1/23/2011 3:23:00 PM
I live in a fallopian world. Constantly judged and battered. Were I live i don't think we will ever be able to be a utopia. I am saddened to admit the truth. Love you art though ^_^
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