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In the world full of strange I find myself in the hands of the enemy, losing control to what I can not see giving mercy to myself for being weak Colliding with the ones, who are like me I gain control of all emotions, except the ones I can't be. I found this one true beauty by my side. ignoring all the crying and lies A sorrow so deep, I can't sleep after I devour what I want Rain will pass, rain will come A coffin, a grave Until there is nothing left, promises--promises! I see the world from the inside you see the world from the outside it takes a better seed of beans a life I buried, a life I intervene no one can explain what I really mean With a twist, I live breaking the laws given to men. Loving the way the world revolves a not so simple fact locked in the brain a poet not to be in this world made insane a loss of instinct, bestowed to roam above with men. Only I can solve the lie about the truth infinity will solve nothing Like a scavenger, I look for prey, while you pray. like the mind on an empty stomach I pity the sun for all its weakness --light. around the dimness of my life I find the truly forgotten sight. a rage with my life cut out by the hands of a knife Exploring the power of the night. in every so-called journey in life. I walk the shoes of the ones I choose. A path with my installed confusion, I produce. in a mental state I leave upon you, reading between the lines the red, yellow bricks you follow are the ones I laid to screw with you. careful if you screw with me, the Universe expands with infinity, -- a study you call it chemistry. Leaving me in this world with an entire flock? the bottom line is the evil one has his own plot. Me myself and I have the need to manipulate the ones WE want. dedicated ~~ To: Nate D.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2015 12:13:00 PM
Linda, this write is brilliant. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 9/11/2014 6:29:00 PM
wonderful you did it again.
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Date: 11/16/2013 3:03:00 PM
Powerful words here and so full of emotions great feelings and expressive words. I've enjoyed the emotions and understand what you are saying here. thank you for bring you my friend. cheri
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:58:00 PM
PD This is a very intense, insightful. deep and thought provoking write. You brought the reader into your soul, mind and heart. Nice job Hugs
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:06:00 PM
:) and the world :)s with you
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Date: 9/29/2013 6:19:00 PM
Manipulate eh hmmmm lol, Would you let me know if I'm STILL waiting to hear how YOU are, (no hints intended) my Sweet Dark Friend. Take care, Richard
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Date: 11/4/2012 6:37:00 PM
Such richness to every line! Just wanted to read some of your older work. Am always both impressed, entertained and touched by your poetry. The last two lines are chilling. But anyway, great one! Always, Laura
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Date: 1/8/2012 4:21:00 AM
Glad i've seen this p.d, gives one an insight to what a wonderful person and poet you are. harry
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Date: 9/24/2011 10:55:00 AM
Congrats PD on this complex well written, well deserved featured write. Vince
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:33:00 PM
Congrats PD my BFF on featured poem this week on PS.. awesome one to share my friend with luv... thankxx so much for all my contest wins.. your contests excite my creative juices luv.. moving among the raindrops today..another 30 days and we should be settled in..oh...oh...oh...your BFF...
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Date: 9/21/2011 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 11:38:00 AM
power, rage, anger, almost a curse...almost a prayer....Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:42:00 PM
& btw, super glad you're liking the sijo I keep on posting--haha hope it's not too much of an overload--I'm restraining myself from posting some more--there still in my head anyway...
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:41:00 PM
Oh wow, this is really deep, p.d.--you sure are a talented one, dearie! You have some gemstone lines here for sure--enjoyed this! & as for you & the Soup--I hope that you'd visit here more often rather than going---and as for me having no life--haha I do have one, it's just a tad monotonous ;)--I think I spend too much of it dreaming ;)...
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Date: 5/25/2010 6:27:00 PM
lol.hi-hi P.D.! hope you night is fantastic! -always
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Date: 4/30/2010 11:31:00 PM
this is great poem...worth the read...^_^ v
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Date: 4/28/2010 9:10:00 PM
Nice! Good job here. Tony
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Date: 4/27/2010 9:51:00 AM
Am I to young to say I've been there . walking in the dark side, posting as a fav.(Baby boy)
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Date: 4/24/2010 11:05:00 PM
wow a plot evil has indeed, good one p.d.
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Date: 4/23/2010 5:37:00 AM
Hi P.D., I worked in Sri Lanka for a few months and saw many rice fields (they are actually called Ppaddy fields), but the most impressive I saw in Indonesia (Bali) on a holiday trip back in the 1980ies. The water is not really muddy only when the women are planting the rice. It is a great picture when the surface mirrors the blue sky and white clouds. Your write here is really brilliant...Keep writing and thanky for your comments...Gert
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Date: 4/23/2010 3:52:00 AM
Yes, P.D., a brilliant write! Enjoyed reading it..And thank you for all your comments. I hope you'll have a nice weekend in full sunshine as we got this here, but it could be still warmer...Gert
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Date: 4/22/2010 6:05:00 PM
hmm,come to think of it, you, yourself are kind of a mystery. i try and see you through the poems you write,im only trying. . and so, with your permission, i will ponder on the attacks you do so well, the riddles you hide behind the meaning of your words & you, yourself some more??(: -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:37:00 AM
Oh my, oh my, quite brilliant my friend. quite brilliant. breath taking and captivizing, i definitly can read between many of these lines.
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Date: 4/21/2010 7:47:00 PM
You wanted dramatic, you created dramatic, much to be pondered, by me myself and I... I think you are very hard upon self.. afterall, you are hiding in the box... right??? anyways Pd, my wish poem is complete, if you care to return, I really like it, my myself and I... my challenge is for you to write a poem, of love, breathtaking and beautiful love... constance
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Date: 4/21/2010 8:42:00 AM
What a mind binder, a twist of what the hell! (B* boy)
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