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March-16.2025

Write Six Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Constance La France

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"When it rains, don't look down on the puddles below and lament, but once the rain subsides, look up to see the rainbow arching in the sky and rejoice." ~ By Poet

Lo! A spectrum of arching colors
in the misty cerulean sky-
A rainbow- nature’s lovely poem,
written on the wide canvas.
God’s benevolent gift	graciously bestowed, 
on a clear evening, after a light drizzle!

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2025

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Ink Empress Date: 3/21/2025 2:13:00 AM I love how youv described rainbows to natures poem, thats very poetic and creative of you dear valsa, your quote is so empowering and uplifting too, and depth of what youv delivered in such a descriptive manner is truly impressive! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always Login to Reply

Terry Miller Date: 3/20/2025 9:12:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this colourful sweet poem Login to Reply

thriveni c mysore Date: 3/20/2025 6:46:00 AM beauty, congratulations on your win dear friend. cheers!!! Login to Reply

Krishnanand Guptar Date: 3/19/2025 11:36:00 PM Congratulations, Valsa, on your top placement in this poetry contest with a "nature`s lovely poem". In a tropical clime, we often see rainbows in the cerulean sky. Wish you a pleasant day crafting your gems. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/19/2025 3:32:00 PM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/sweet write and quote. Love Both... Great Picture... I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away.................. Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 3/19/2025 3:07:00 PM Wow! Amazing work. Quote and poem are worthy of winning! Congratulations Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 3/18/2025 8:49:00 PM Dearest Valsa,what a beautiful and serene poem! I love how you describe the rainbow as nature’s own poetry—so vivid and graceful. The imagery is lovely, and the last line feels like a gentle blessing. Well done my freind...Hugs Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 3/18/2025 10:50:00 AM Very beautiful! Indeed, rainbows are Divine! Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 3/18/2025 10:30:00 AM I missed reading your wonderful poems my dear friend.... Love the positive feeling behind your poem and the spiritual nature.. you said so much in only six lines.. Best of luck in the contest.. Peace and Blessings.. Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 3/18/2025 6:21:00 AM i love rainbows too, thanks for the brilliant images, so cute reading Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 3/17/2025 10:51:00 AM I love rainbows. Although they emerge after rain for a short time, they build bridges of imagination and happiness. Nice poem. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 3/17/2025 5:52:00 AM Dear Valsa, O' such a quiet blessing, a gentle hand lifting the chin upward. I love how your words move with such grace, and yes beauty often follows the storm even the simplest moments, like a light drizzle, can leave behind something wondrous. Thank you for this, Valsa. It’s a soft, needed God filled light. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend Daniel Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/17/2025 2:45:00 AM I love rainbows. Occasionally I see two at the same time. Rainbows are indeed God's gift. Best for a win, dear Valsa. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/16/2025 12:42:00 PM Beautiful they are too Valsa, the colours are amazing, hope your weekend is going well. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy the week ahead. Tom Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 3/16/2025 11:16:00 AM Dear Valsa, the idea of rediscovering joy and beauty in the wake of hardship is explored in this amazing poem. It urges readers to shift their focus away from challenges (rain and puddles) and toward the beauty that follows (the rainbow). The poem uses powerful metaphors and words like "spectrum of arching colors," "misty cerulean sky," and "nature's wonderful poem." These selections provide a vivid picture for the reader, instilling a sense of awe and admiration for nature. Login to Reply