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March-16.2025

Write Six Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Constance La France

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"When it rains, don't look down on the puddles below and lament, but once the rain subsides, look up to see the rainbow arching in the sky and rejoice." ~ By Poet Lo! A spectrum of arching colors in the misty cerulean sky- A rainbow- nature’s lovely poem, written on the wide canvas. God’s benevolent gift graciously bestowed, on a clear evening, after a light drizzle!

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/21/2025 2:13:00 AM

I love how youv described rainbows to natures poem, thats very poetic and creative of you dear valsa, your quote is so empowering and uplifting too, and depth of what youv delivered in such a descriptive manner is truly impressive! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Terry Miller

Date: 3/20/2025 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this colourful sweet poem

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/20/2025 6:46:00 AM

beauty, congratulations on your win dear friend. cheers!!!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 3/19/2025 11:36:00 PM

Congratulations, Valsa, on your top placement in this poetry contest with a "nature`s lovely poem". In a tropical clime, we often see rainbows in the cerulean sky. Wish you a pleasant day crafting your gems.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/19/2025 3:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/sweet write and quote. Love Both... Great Picture... I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................

Karen Jones

Date: 3/19/2025 3:07:00 PM

Wow! Amazing work. Quote and poem are worthy of winning! Congratulations

Maria Williams

Date: 3/18/2025 8:49:00 PM

Dearest Valsa,what a beautiful and serene poem! I love how you describe the rainbow as nature’s own poetry—so vivid and graceful. The imagery is lovely, and the last line feels like a gentle blessing. Well done my freind...Hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/18/2025 10:50:00 AM

Very beautiful! Indeed, rainbows are Divine!

Silent One

Date: 3/18/2025 10:30:00 AM

I missed reading your wonderful poems my dear friend.... Love the positive feeling behind your poem and the spiritual nature.. you said so much in only six lines.. Best of luck in the contest.. Peace and Blessings..

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/18/2025 6:21:00 AM

i love rainbows too, thanks for the brilliant images, so cute reading

Jay Narain

Date: 3/17/2025 10:51:00 AM

I love rainbows. Although they emerge after rain for a short time, they build bridges of imagination and happiness. Nice poem.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/17/2025 5:52:00 AM

Dear Valsa, O' such a quiet blessing, a gentle hand lifting the chin upward. I love how your words move with such grace, and yes beauty often follows the storm even the simplest moments, like a light drizzle, can leave behind something wondrous. Thank you for this, Valsa. It’s a soft, needed God filled light. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend Daniel

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/17/2025 2:45:00 AM

I love rainbows. Occasionally I see two at the same time. Rainbows are indeed God's gift. Best for a win, dear Valsa.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/16/2025 12:42:00 PM

Beautiful they are too Valsa, the colours are amazing, hope your weekend is going well. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy the week ahead. Tom

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/16/2025 11:16:00 AM

Dear Valsa, the idea of rediscovering joy and beauty in the wake of hardship is explored in this amazing poem. It urges readers to shift their focus away from challenges (rain and puddles) and toward the beauty that follows (the rainbow). The poem uses powerful metaphors and words like "spectrum of arching colors," "misty cerulean sky," and "nature's wonderful poem." These selections provide a vivid picture for the reader, instilling a sense of awe and admiration for nature.