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Archery

Two friends go camping In the wilderness They bring a target board With bows and arrows The target is up They all get ready One at a time wait For each of their turns For a perfect aim One friend aimed- then let go The arrow did not go far Only a short distence The other friend tried The best he could Only he got bruised When the arrow flew He ended up with a bruse That took awhile to heal It did not matter to him He enjoyed the sport

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/17/2017 8:39:00 AM

Born under the sign of Sagittarius, I'm definitely an archery lover! I enjoyed reading this well-written piece celebrating this skillful and challenging sport! BRAVA, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/17/2017 11:15:00 AM

Hello Pandita my friend. When i was a little girl I did archery. I never hit the target,but I was close to the target. It was a lot of fun. Thank you. I enjoyed to write this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 10/23/2017 6:04:00 PM

Gotta be careful of that bow string. It'll get you every time.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/23/2017 8:39:00 PM

I think the bow string is very strong. It can give a person a bruise. have a nice evening my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/19/2017 10:19:00 AM

Sport is relaxing and a source of pleasure, Darlene. I love archery, and my g'daughter & I go together to practice it when time permits. Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2017 7:49:00 AM

Hello Paul,oh that is a lovely way to spend time with your granddaughter. Are you good at it? I use to do it at summer camp. have a nice day my friend.

Gert Wewege

Date: 10/18/2017 4:30:00 AM

I am not very poetic but when I read this it has such a deeper meaning to me that I can read my life tale in this poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2017 11:31:00 AM

Hello Gert,how are you? Wow! Thank you Gert. Have a nice day my friend.