Archery

Two friends go camping
In the wilderness
They bring a target board
With bows and arrows

The target is up
They all get ready
One at a time wait
For each of their turns

For a perfect aim
One friend aimed- then let go
The arrow did not go far
Only a short distence

The other friend tried 
The best he could
Only he got bruised
When the arrow flew

He ended up with a bruse
That took awhile to heal
It did not matter to him
He enjoyed the sport
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sietesantos Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Born under the sign of Sagittarius, I'm definitely an archery lover! I enjoyed reading this well-written piece celebrating this skillful and challenging sport! BRAVA, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Hello Pandita my friend. When i was a little girl I did archery. I never hit the target,but I was close to the target. It was a lot of fun. Thank you. I enjoyed to write this poem. have a nice day my friend.
Berggren Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 6:04 PM
Gotta be careful of that bow string. It'll get you every time.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 8:39 PM
I think the bow string is very strong. It can give a person a bruise. have a nice evening my friend.
Callus Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Sport is relaxing and a source of pleasure, Darlene. I love archery, and my g'daughter & I go together to practice it when time permits. Regards // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Hello Paul,oh that is a lovely way to spend time with your granddaughter. Are you good at it? I use to do it at summer camp. have a nice day my friend.
Wewege Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 4:30 AM
I am not very poetic but when I read this it has such a deeper meaning to me that I can read my life tale in this poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 11:31 AM
Hello Gert,how are you? Wow! Thank you Gert. Have a nice day my friend.
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