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Aquila - Collaboration With White Wolf

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The wind swept up in a tormenting gale, Both the ground below and the sky were frail, History repeats or so they do say, All the elements released on this day. Fire consumed earth with its passing flame, Enraged were the oceans, nothing was tame, Volcanic ash filled the air like a cloud, Thunder was clapping as if it were proud. No one could see in the gathering sky, Up high above a great eagle did fly, Talons on the ready to strike his prey, This son of none, he was flying this way. Dove down, flash of lightning, relentless speed Accurate hurricane, in time of need *** March 7, 2017 White Wolf Darren White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/1/2017 3:50:00 AM
The imagery was absolutely amazing! Wow..
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Pin Dew
Date: 5/1/2017 8:44:00 AM
Yes, I do! :)
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Darren White
Date: 5/1/2017 4:15:00 AM
Thank you, I see you enjoy sonnets :)
Date: 3/14/2017 10:31:00 PM
Always a pleasure writing with you, Duir!
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Darren White
Date: 3/15/2017 1:16:00 AM
Same, Budgie, absolutely the same. Budgie and Duir strike again ;)
Date: 3/9/2017 9:43:00 AM
So you guys got together and drank some tequila? Oh wait - sorry, should have read more closely. Nice flight. And on the 'White' conspiracy, let us not forget that white is all the colors of the rainbow combined. : )
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Darren White
Date: 3/10/2017 1:00:00 AM
It rhymes well, Doug haha :) And yeah! That's right about those colours. Does it also work when your name is (Darren) White, but your skin is more mocha/olive coloured?
Date: 3/7/2017 9:50:00 PM
Powerful words and a great collaboration by White and White ;) <3
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Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 11:40:00 PM
White and White strike again, what can I say LOLOL
Date: 3/7/2017 1:50:00 PM
- A great co-write - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2017 9:32:00 AM
I don't know how you managed to drag that guy out of his den, but I'm glad you did Darren. Nice collaboration to both of you.
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Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 9:34:00 AM
With my special powers!!!! Budgie just can't resist lol ;) But in all honesty, I do have to say it's 75% Budgies poem, but I love it :)
Date: 3/7/2017 7:49:00 AM
A seamless collaboration by the White brothers (lol), I could feel the tempest rising.
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Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 7:51:00 AM
Ahahaha, do you know that until this moment I never paid attention to the White thing :D But yes, thank you for your kind words.
Date: 3/7/2017 2:01:00 AM
A wonderful collab and great to see something from Budgie
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Darren White
Date: 3/7/2017 2:03:00 AM
Thanks :) he'll be back, just wait and see!

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