Aquarius

I always saw myself, a rarity
My inner peace comes with clarity
I'm so extreme, it often seems
The world is so unfair to me

Then I was called an Aquarius 
Turns out, there are many of us
About as rare as a rocking chair
Or a pecan in a can of nuts

But how in the world could it be
Are there really others, just like me
Deliriously mysterious
Tempting the line of both extremes

I've accepted that I'm strange
Agreed that I won't change
But I was taught, it was my fault
It was I who was deranged

Now I just observe
I need not speak a word
No longer blind, I see my kind
I admit, it seems absurd 

As if I walk around
Without speaking sound
But even still, others will
Know I am a clown

They'll know I'm awfully odd
By the transparency of my facade
I cannot hide, won't tell a lie
They'd know I was a fraud

Just look at my date of birth
It will tell you what I'm worth
No need to wait, inevitable fate
Now you know henceforth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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September 21, 2017 at 2:27 PM
You speak,in verse, for many,many Aquarians.....Awesome!!
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September 5, 2017 at 5:00 AM
Anna, there are many of us like you here in the Soup! We that think we are outcasts, strange and different people! Those of us that are unique shine through, and here we are, really special in our very way! There might be similarities within our birthday traits, but none are as unique as us poets are! Just remember you have a group of people that are like you in many ways, and that care for you even though you feel separate, different, and left sided! Those that are left handed are artists!
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September 5, 2017 at 5:01 AM
Great Work, my friend! Love the poem!
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September 4, 2017 at 2:14 PM
This is very nice Anna, such simplification in your expression - I love it - Mike
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September 4, 2017 at 1:47 PM
I love it Anna...so many personalities can be ascertained by date of birth...a favorite
Michael Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:40 PM
Really nice. Very true. I think you found it. Thank God for you...Enjoyed it...Thanks for sharing...Have a nice evening
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September 4, 2017 at 1:25 PM
Hello Anna ,lovely poem. using simple words.I like the way the words flow together. Have a nice day my friend.
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September 4, 2017 at 12:10 PM
A lovely poem Anna--well written in simple words--a pleasure to read!
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