Aqua Sonata
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27th November 2021 I took out an ampersand a comma
And replaceded an ampersand with and
At 8 o'clock in the evening
All the best wishes to my readers.'
Surfside stand a lady & man
lost in (a moment) on silca lands
so stand this even (handed two)
before a sky limpid blue
with a hearts glow to melt the burning sand.
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Love limned laughter, (lines out) sweet promised sign,
satin billows of cloud surround divine,
backdrop sky a blue silk screen
young as fun forever keen
pre-empting fate this faultless time.
Pouring waves and passion combine
light moods, effervescent (platinum fine)
flows a presence vivid and wild,
flaming love; (destiny's child,)
raptured revolving evolving in time.
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By Joe Maverick,copyright 2011 for Linda-Marie's loveland limerick contest.
Copyright © Joe Maverick | Year Posted 2011
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