Aphrodite's Rose

From a garden I would seek
a flower so much more unique,
something quite sophisticated,
leaves lovers much intoxicated. 

This thought distressed my heart to sigh  
which told my mind my eyes would die
and thus invite ten tons of woes 
if they praise not, the lovely Rose.

I love the Rose in all its hues -
The yellow, pink, white for my muse.
One image though quite bold and mighty
the Blood Red Rose of Aphrodite.

The Blood Rose is passion's prose,
Mary’s heart bled in repose;
the symbol of undying love,
as much of life, of peace…is dove.

Sweet, and quite of regal bearing,
odd, the thorns make it endearing.
My one request upon my death -
scent of a Rose, be my last breath.




Note:  Legend has it that Aphrodite, in her haste to go to her dying beloved Adonis, trod upon the thorny bush of a white rose, whereupon her sacred goddess blood turned it into a deep color red.


09 November 2015
Favorite Flower Contest - 2nd Place
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
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Teaser Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Beautiful and very unique..
Lindley Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 11:56 PM
TRULY WONDERFUL POEM MY FRIEND. Lucky to have found it tonight as my last read before going to sleep. A7
Callus Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 12:31 PM
Hi Kim...I must have missed this delightful poem before, but glad I found it now! Mythology is inspiring. Lovely twoend lines. Hugs // paul
Godwin Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 7:21 AM
Your poem is lovely and an absolute joy to read. I am touched by these pretty words ... CayCay
Laurie Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 6:36 PM
Hello Kim... you brought a legend to reality with your fine constructed poem - thank you Kim - Lindsay
Kendrick Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..The rose in all its beauty captured in your lines..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 12:56 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win KIM. Love always........A..M.
Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 12:39 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful this is KIM. Your write is always great and excellent my lovely brilliant friend. I'm intoxicated by your write...........A.M.
Canerdy Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 7:56 PM
This is an absolutely LOVELY and well-written poem! Congratulations on your win. Janice
Duggan Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Hi Kim, this is one beautiful poem, ahhhhhhhhh! Roses they are so beautiful, I don't know much about Aphrodite but if it is connected to Roses then I love it, we have this beautiful red Rose in the garden I would love to pick it and send it to you, you would love it, hope you are well, take care.........Vera
Sergi Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 5:30 PM
Hi Patrice: I am so in awe of the words you wrote in this poem and how you personified the red rose in the mythical history of Aphrodite and Adonis. Bravo!
Sergi Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Hi Patrice: I am so in awe of the words you wrote in this poem and how you personified the red rose in the mythical history of Aphrodite and Adonis. Bravo!
Inman Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Who doesn't love a rose? Beautiful write Kim.
A  Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Kim, Congratulations on your "Favorite Flower win." SKAT
Tor Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Kim a wonderful write and win!! Congratulations!
Woods    Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 10:59 PM
Awesome poem, no wonder this was a winner. And yes what a smell to have as your last breath.
Vaso Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 9:27 PM
I just saw you won! Congrats, very well deserved!
Vaso Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 9:25 PM
what a beautiful poem! Loved this!
Ebbs Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 8:19 PM
Enjoyed reading this congrats!
Terry Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Congrats, dear Kim. Love the roses and love your poem. I'm happy it placed well. hugs. Janece
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:57 PM
I love roses too. And that was my flower for the contest. Big congrats. You did yours in a unique way focusing on Aphrodite!!
Romaine Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Hey Kim, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful winning poem in the contest! Lovely. Be Blessed, Neva
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Absolutely beautiful Kim - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Fleming Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 2:22 PM
This poem of yours really is very good, Kim. The nicest poem I have read tonight - Excellent! My very warmest regards! :) john P.s A 7+
Negron Flores Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations in your win.
Nunez Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Thank you so much for the inspiration and the placement, Nayda. hugs!
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