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Aphrodite's Rose

From a garden I would seek a flower so much more unique, something quite sophisticated, leaves lovers much intoxicated. This thought distressed my heart to sigh which told my mind my eyes would die and thus invite ten tons of woes if they praise not, the lovely Rose. I love the Rose in all its hues - The yellow, pink, white for my muse. One image though quite bold and mighty the Blood Red Rose of Aphrodite. The Blood Rose is passion's prose, Mary’s heart bled in repose; the symbol of undying love, as much of life, of peace…is dove. Sweet, and quite of regal bearing, odd, the thorns make it endearing. My one request upon my death - scent of a Rose, be my last breath. Note: Legend has it that Aphrodite, in her haste to go to her dying beloved Adonis, trod upon the thorny bush of a white rose, whereupon her sacred goddess blood turned it into a deep color red. 09 November 2015 Favorite Flower Contest - 2nd Place Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 2/7/2016 9:43:00 AM
Beautiful and very unique..
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Date: 12/13/2015 11:56:00 PM
TRULY WONDERFUL POEM MY FRIEND. Lucky to have found it tonight as my last read before going to sleep. A7
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Date: 11/20/2015 12:31:00 PM
Hi Kim...I must have missed this delightful poem before, but glad I found it now! Mythology is inspiring. Lovely twoend lines. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/12/2015 7:21:00 AM
Your poem is lovely and an absolute joy to read. I am touched by these pretty words ... CayCay
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Date: 11/11/2015 6:36:00 PM
Hello Kim... you brought a legend to reality with your fine constructed poem - thank you Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 11/11/2015 9:15:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..The rose in all its beauty captured in your lines..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 11/11/2015 12:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win KIM. Love always........A..M.
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Date: 11/11/2015 12:39:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful this is KIM. Your write is always great and excellent my lovely brilliant friend. I'm intoxicated by your write...........A.M.
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Date: 11/10/2015 7:56:00 PM
This is an absolutely LOVELY and well-written poem! Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Date: 11/10/2015 6:00:00 PM
Hi Kim, this is one beautiful poem, ahhhhhhhhh! Roses they are so beautiful, I don't know much about Aphrodite but if it is connected to Roses then I love it, we have this beautiful red Rose in the garden I would love to pick it and send it to you, you would love it, hope you are well, take care.........Vera
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Date: 11/10/2015 5:30:00 PM
Hi Patrice: I am so in awe of the words you wrote in this poem and how you personified the red rose in the mythical history of Aphrodite and Adonis. Bravo!
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Date: 11/10/2015 5:28:00 PM
Hi Patrice: I am so in awe of the words you wrote in this poem and how you personified the red rose in the mythical history of Aphrodite and Adonis. Bravo!
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:58:00 PM
Who doesn't love a rose? Beautiful write Kim.
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Date: 11/10/2015 11:49:00 AM
Kim, Congratulations on your "Favorite Flower win." SKAT
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:40:00 AM
Kim a wonderful write and win!! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/9/2015 10:59:00 PM
Awesome poem, no wonder this was a winner. And yes what a smell to have as your last breath.
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Date: 11/9/2015 9:27:00 PM
I just saw you won! Congrats, very well deserved!
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Date: 11/9/2015 9:25:00 PM
what a beautiful poem! Loved this!
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this congrats!
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Date: 11/9/2015 7:07:00 PM
Congrats, dear Kim. Love the roses and love your poem. I'm happy it placed well. hugs. Janece
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Date: 11/9/2015 3:57:00 PM
I love roses too. And that was my flower for the contest. Big congrats. You did yours in a unique way focusing on Aphrodite!!
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:56:00 PM
Hey Kim, a warm and hearty congratulations on your wonderful winning poem in the contest! Lovely. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:43:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Kim - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:22:00 PM
This poem of yours really is very good, Kim. The nicest poem I have read tonight - Excellent! My very warmest regards! :) john P.s A 7+
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Date: 11/9/2015 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations in your win.
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Date: 11/10/2015 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for the inspiration and the placement, Nayda. hugs!
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