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Anything But Him

Peripatetic movement impedes as I draw near to an atrocious condemned king Probing him, in conceptualizing & equating potential Composure rapidly decomposes, investigating potential future Ever so sickening to these eyes, sluggish gags massage my throat Am I to develop in any fashion of this creature? Recuperating composure and ingesting gags peripatetic movement finds its place in contemporary time The words I articulate to such a fiend, “Hey dad, how’s it going?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/16/2009 7:35:00 AM
This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke
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Date: 8/16/2009 7:34:00 AM
This is an excellent, wonderful piece, you are a wonderful poet I love the flow of words… please keep the flag flying and congratulations on a well deserved feature of the week. You are great friend!. Adeleke
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Date: 8/11/2009 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/11/2009 3:40:00 AM
a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/10/2009 5:26:00 AM
James - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured, James Keep writing! DAS-J
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Date: 8/9/2009 11:21:00 AM
congrats on being feature.
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Date: 8/9/2009 10:47:00 AM
Sad situation. Good use of imagery and alliteration. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/13/2008 10:54:00 PM
I can relate... *Breana*
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